Singing— Part 1 Informe
Conversación
Part 1
Examinador
Do you like singing? Why?
Candidato
Well, I would have to say that I like singing. I really love it because when I was a kid, I want to be a singer, and becoming a singer is always my.
Examinador
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Candidato
Well, I have to say that Nah, no, I I don't think I have a talent. I will try it before, but it's too hard for me.
Examinador
Who do you want to sing for?
Candidato
If someone asked me that question, I will say that my mom because I really loved her and so if I had a chance I feel sing for her.
Examinador
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Candidato
Yes, of course. In my opinion, umm music is very youthful and special. It can umm, bring happiness to people and uh. Make them feel better. Sometimes when I feel bad I usually listen to music to Video Music.
Evaluación
Total
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ như 'I want' nên là 'I wanted'. Bạn nên sử dụng thì quá khứ cho hành động trong quá khứ và hoàn thiện câu để tránh bị dang dở. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, tự nhiên và có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn.
Ejemplo: Yes, I like singing because I have always wanted to be a singer since I was a child. Singing makes me feel happy and relaxed.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không trang trọng như 'Nah' và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp như 'I will try it before' thành 'I have tried it before'. Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, mạch lạc và có cấu trúc đúng thì.
Ejemplo: No, I haven't learned how to sing professionally. I have tried singing lessons before, but I found it quite difficult.
Who do you want to sing for?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: Bạn cần sử dụng thì phù hợp và cấu trúc câu chính xác hơn, ví dụ 'I really loved her' nên là 'I really love her'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'I feel sing for her' nên là 'I would sing for her'.
Ejemplo: If I had the chance, I would like to sing for my mom because I really love her and want to make her happy.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng các từ ngữ thừa như 'umm' và 'uh' để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Ngoài ra, câu cuối cùng có vẻ không rõ nghĩa 'listen to music to Video Music' nên được sửa lại. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
Ejemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because music is special and uplifting. For example, when I feel sad, I usually listen to music to improve my mood.
Gramática
× I want to be a singer, and becoming a singer is always my.
✓ I wanted to be a singer, and becoming a singer was always my dream.
The sentence refers to a past desire, so the verb 'want' should be in the past tense 'wanted'. Also, 'is always my' is incomplete and should be corrected to 'was always my dream' to make sense and maintain past tense consistency.
× I will try it before, but it's too hard for me.
✓ I have tried it before, but it's too hard for me.
The phrase 'will try it before' is incorrect because 'before' indicates a past action. The correct modal verb phrase is 'have tried' to indicate past experience.
× If someone asked me that question, I will say that my mom because I really loved her and so if I had a chance I feel sing for her.
✓ If someone asked me that question, I would say my mom because I really love her, and if I had a chance, I would sing for her.
The sentence mixes conditional forms incorrectly. In the second conditional, 'If someone asked' should be followed by 'I would say'. Also, 'I really loved her' should be present tense 'love' to express ongoing feeling. 'I feel sing for her' is incorrect; it should be 'I would sing for her' to express hypothetical action.
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