Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to expand your answer by adding more specific reasons and use linking words to make your response more natural and effective. For example, explain how singing helps you relax or mention situations when you like to sing.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like singing because it helps me feel relaxed after a long day. Moreover, singing allows me to express my emotions and forget about my worries.

Sugerencia: Your answer is a bit unclear and lacks structure. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence and provide supporting details using linking words. Also, avoid hesitations and improve sentence clarity.

Ejemplo: I have not taken formal singing lessons, but I learned how to sing naturally by watching movies and practicing songs I like.

Sugerencia: Avoid hesitations and repetitions to make your answer more fluent. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide a clear, concise response with specific details.

Ejemplo: I want to sing for my husband and daughter because singing is a beautiful way to express my feelings and show them how much I love them.

Sugerencia: Your answer has many hesitations and repetitions which affect clarity. Try to organize your ideas clearly using linking words and provide specific examples without repeating words unnecessarily.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. For instance, when I feel sad, I listen to the Quran or some songs, and this helps improve my mood and makes me feel happier.

× To be honest, I learned how to sing from movies and by natural I think.

✓ To be honest, I learned how to sing from movies and naturally, I think.

The phrase 'by natural' is incorrect; the correct adverb form is 'naturally' to describe the manner of learning. This is an issue of incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs, but since it relates to verb modification, it fits best under past tense issue for correction context.

× I want to sing for my husband and my daughter because I think singing, sorry, it's, it's one, it's it's a way to express our feeling so they can know how how much I love them.

✓ I want to sing for my husband and my daughter because I think singing, sorry, it's one, it's a way to express our feelings so they can know how much I love them.

The word 'feeling' should be plural 'feelings' because it refers to multiple emotions. Also, the repeated words 'it's, it's' and 'how how' are redundant and should be corrected for clarity and fluency.

× For example when when when we feel sad and pick any any any song it it make it make us happy.

✓ For example, when we feel sad and pick any song, it makes us happy.

The verb 'make' should be in third person singular form 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, repeated words should be removed for clarity.

× For example when I feeling sad I like to to listen to Quran and sometimes some songs but mostly to to.

✓ For example, when I feel sad, I like to listen to the Quran and sometimes some songs, but mostly to it.

The verb 'feeling' should be 'feel' to match the present tense. Also, 'to to' is a repetition error and should be corrected. The definite article 'the' is needed before 'Quran' as it is a specific text.