Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, ví dụ như 'Seeing' thay vì 'Singing', và câu trả lời thiếu sự mạch lạc, lặp từ và không sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý. Bạn nên chú ý phát âm chính xác từ vựng, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax after a busy day. For example, when I feel stressed, singing allows me to escape from the noise of the city and feel happier.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng từ ngữ lặp lại và tiếng ừ ừ không cần thiết. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, mạch lạc và có cấu trúc tốt hơn. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để nối các ý và diễn đạt lý do một cách cụ thể hơn.

Ejemplo: No, I have never taken singing lessons because I am quite busy. However, I enjoy singing as a hobby during my free time, and I feel that is enough for me.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp như 'creation of time' và câu cuối không hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và cụ thể hơn về lý do bạn muốn hát cho ai.

Ejemplo: I like to sing for my close friends because we enjoy spending time together. Singing for them helps us strengthen our friendship and share happy moments.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng cấu trúc câu chính xác hơn. Câu trả lời nên có liên từ để kết nối các ý và cụ thể hơn về cách hát mang lại hạnh phúc. Hãy sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu hoàn chỉnh.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness to people worldwide. For example, many people sing to relax and express their emotions, which helps improve their mood.

× Definitely yes. Seeing has been my lovely habit since my childhood because it helps me a lot in admitting after a busy day when I want to escape from the hustle and bustle of city life.

✓ Definitely yes. Singing has been my lovely habit since my childhood because it helps me a lot in relaxing after a busy day when I want to escape from the hustle and bustle of city life.

The word 'Seeing' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'Singing' which fits the context. Also, 'admitting' is incorrect; the intended meaning is 'relaxing'. The present participle 'singing' is used as a noun (gerund) to describe the habit.

× No, I haven't learned how to sing, umm, because I don't have too much time to do it, and I think singing just is just a hobby in my recreational time.

✓ No, I haven't learned how to sing, umm, because I don't have much time to do it, and I think singing is just a hobby in my recreational time.

The phrase 'too much time' is better replaced with 'much time' in negative sentences. Also, the repeated 'just is just' is redundant; it should be 'is just'. This corrects the tense and usage for clarity.

× So I didn't learn how to sing, and I think it's quite good. Mm-hmm. It's enough for me.

✓ So I didn't learn how to sing, and I think that's quite good. Mm-hmm. It's enough for me.

The phrase 'it's quite good' is vague; 'that's quite good' refers back to the idea of not learning to sing, making the sentence clearer and structurally correct.

× I desire to sing for everybody around me, especially my close knit group of friends.

✓ I desire to sing for everybody around me, especially my close-knit group of friends.

The phrase 'close knit' should be hyphenated as 'close-knit' when used as an adjective before a noun.

× They are really lovely and we are able to have creation of time together.

✓ They are really lovely and we are able to spend quality time together.

The phrase 'have creation of time' is incorrect and unnatural. The correct expression is 'spend quality time' to convey the intended meaning.

× I think for them and they sing for me is good.

✓ I think singing for them and them singing for me is good.

The original sentence lacks proper structure. Using gerunds 'singing' clarifies the meaning and improves sentence structure.

× We can develop our connection at our.

✓ We can develop our connection together.

The phrase 'at our' is incomplete and incorrect. 'Together' is the appropriate word to complete the sentence meaningfully.

× Entirely yes, I suppose singing can bring happiness to people over the world.

✓ Entirely yes, I suppose singing can bring happiness to people all over the world.

The phrase 'people over the world' is incorrect; the correct prepositional phrase is 'people all over the world'.

× First of all, I I believe that people over the world are in love in singing, and they can sing to unwind and express their feelings in a in the best ways.

✓ First of all, I believe that people all over the world love singing, and they can sing to unwind and express their feelings in the best ways.

The phrase 'people over the world' should be 'people all over the world'. Also, 'are in love in singing' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'love singing'. The article 'a' before 'in the best ways' is unnecessary and removed.