Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể và mạch lạc. Hạn chế lặp từ và sử dụng các câu ngắn gọn, dễ hiểu.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like singing because it is my favorite hobby. It helps me relax and express my emotions, especially when I listen to songs on the radio.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp nghiêm trọng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng thì quá khứ đúng và cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể về việc học hát.

Ejemplo: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was a child. I took singing lessons with a teacher who helped me perform in front of an audience.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có thể cải thiện bằng cách sử dụng từ vựng phong phú hơn và thêm chi tiết để làm câu trả lời sinh động hơn.

Ejemplo: I want to sing for my family because they always support and encourage me. Singing for them makes me feel happy and appreciated.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ nghĩa và có lỗi từ vựng ("improve their dress" không phù hợp). Bạn nên giải thích rõ hơn về lợi ích của việc hát và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it helps people relax and express their feelings through music.

× Yes, I enjoy singing because it is my favorite hobby and I like singing because it's a radio track for me and improve my.

✓ Yes, I enjoy singing because it is my favorite hobby and I like singing because it's like a radio track for me and it improves me.

The original sentence lacks the subject 'it' before 'improve' and uses 'improve' instead of 'improves' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'radio track' is unclear; 'like a radio track' clarifies the meaning. The verb after 'and' needs to be in third person singular form to agree with the subject.

× Uh, when I were child, uh, when I were child, I have a learn to think to, umm, with the teacher, uh, let you uh, see it for audience.

✓ Uh, when I was a child, I learned to sing with the teacher and perform for the audience.

The phrase 'when I were child' is incorrect; 'were' should be 'was' for first person singular past tense. 'I have a learn to think to' is ungrammatical and unclear; corrected to 'I learned to sing'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I want to sing for my family because they are supporting me every time and everywhere.

✓ I want to sing for my family because they support me all the time and everywhere.

The phrase 'every time' is incorrect; 'all the time' is the correct expression. Also, 'are supporting' is present continuous which is less appropriate here; simple present 'support' is better for habitual actions.

× Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because singing can improve their dress and can relax by the music.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because singing can improve their mood and can help them relax with music.

'Improve their dress' is incorrect; likely intended 'improve their mood'. 'Can relax by the music' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'help them relax with music' to properly use the verb and preposition.