Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to directly answer the question first, then give clear reasons. Avoid irrelevant information like cricket unless it relates to singing. Use simple and correct sentences.

Ejemplo: I like listening to songs because I love music, but I have never learned to sing since my childhood. My hobby was playing cricket, so I did not practice singing much.

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat off-topic and repetitive. Focus on answering the question directly and provide clear reasons. Avoid repeating unrelated details about cricket unless it connects to singing.

Ejemplo: No, I have never learned to sing because my family did not encourage singing. Instead, I spent my childhood playing cricket with my father and brother.

Sugerencia: Your answer has some unclear phrases and repetition. Try to use correct vocabulary and sentence structure. Clearly state who you want to sing for and why, using linking words to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: I want to sing for my beloved husband and my child because I love them very much. Singing for them will help us create happy memories together.

Sugerencia: Your answer has good ideas but contains grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Use simple, clear sentences and correct grammar. Use linking words to organize your ideas logically.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness because it creates a refreshing melody that reduces stress. People enjoy both singing and listening to songs, which is good for mental health.

× Actually, I like hearing a song because I love music, but I cannot sing a song in from my childhood.

✓ Actually, I like listening to songs because I love music, but I have not been able to sing since my childhood.

The verb 'like' is usually followed by the gerund form 'listening' rather than 'hearing' when expressing enjoyment. Also, 'hearing a song' is unnatural; 'listening to songs' is correct. The phrase 'cannot sing a song in from my childhood' is incorrect; it should be 'have not been able to sing since my childhood' to express inability from past to present.

× I used to play cricket in my hometown and that was my hobby and so that I come to sing like a singer.

✓ I used to play cricket in my hometown, and that was my hobby, so I did not pursue singing like a singer.

The sentence is awkward and unclear. 'So that I come to sing like a singer' is incorrect. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and improves sentence structure by connecting ideas properly.

× No, I have not ever learnt how to sing because of my family's disliking over singing a song or practicing a song.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing because my family dislikes singing or practicing songs.

The phrase 'have not ever learnt' is better expressed as 'have never learned'. 'Disliking over' is incorrect; 'dislikes' is the correct verb. Also, 'a song' is unnecessary; 'singing or practicing songs' is more natural.

× My father also was a player, so I and my brother used to play in games together in our home.

✓ My father was also a player, so my brother and I used to play games together at home.

The order 'I and my brother' is unnatural; 'my brother and I' is correct. 'Play in games' is incorrect; 'play games' is correct. 'In our home' is better as 'at home'.

× I want to sing for my better hub and my child, Mr. Tariff.

✓ I want to sing for my better half and my child, Mr. Tariff.

'Better hub' is a mispronunciation or misspelling of 'better half', a common term for spouse. Correcting this improves clarity.

× I want them to memorize them and want to recall them with singing a song so I I can sing a song for my child and my better husband.

✓ I want them to remember me and recall me through my singing, so I can sing for my child and my better half.

The sentence uses 'them' incorrectly; it should refer to 'me' as the singer. 'Better husband' is incorrect; 'better half' is the correct phrase. Also, 'singing a song' is better as 'my singing'.

× Obviously singing can bring happiness to the people because singing have a has a refreshing image and that creates melody that eradicates mental stretch.

✓ Obviously, singing can bring happiness to people because singing has a refreshing image and creates a melody that eradicates mental stress.

'Singing have a has a' is incorrect; it should be 'singing has a'. 'Mental stretch' is incorrect; 'mental stress' is the correct phrase.

× People can enjoy singing a song also hearing a song.

✓ People can enjoy singing songs as well as listening to songs.

The sentence is awkward and unclear. 'Singing a song also hearing a song' is incorrect. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and improves sentence structure.

× No obviously singing is a very good for mind business.

✓ No, obviously singing is very good for the mind.

'A very good for mind business' is incorrect and unclear. The corrected sentence uses proper adjectives and articles to convey the intended meaning.