Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법 오류가 있습니다. 'liked to singing' 대신 'liked singing'을 사용하고, 'since I was middle school students'는 'since I was in middle school'로 수정하세요. 또한, 문장을 간결하게 하여 중복을 피하고, 명확한 주제 문장과 구체적인 이유를 포함하세요.

Ejemplo: I liked singing when I was a child, but since I entered middle school, I stopped enjoying it because I thought my low voice wasn't suitable for singing.

Sugerencia: 답변이 명확하지 않고 문법과 표현에 오류가 많습니다. 'No pick'은 의미가 불분명하며, 'encouraged me for learning' 대신 'encouraged me to learn'을 사용하세요. 또한, 'learned about using, not playing the musical instrument' 부분은 명확하게 다시 표현해야 합니다.

Ejemplo: No, I have never learned how to sing. However, my family encouraged me to learn musical instruments, so I have studied how to use them rather than singing.

Sugerencia: 문장이 자연스럽지 않고 문법 오류가 있습니다. 'lots of song has'는 'lots of songs have'로 수정하고, 'if my kids hear it, I think listening they can feel good mood'는 더 명확하고 자연스럽게 표현하세요. 또한, 문장을 간결하게 유지하세요.

Ejemplo: I want to sing for my future children because many songs have beautiful lyrics for kids. I believe listening to these songs will make them feel happy.

Sugerencia: 답변이 다소 반복적이고 문법 오류가 있습니다. 'lots of Korean like singing'은 'many Koreans like singing'으로 수정하고, 문장 연결을 자연스럽게 하기 위해 접속사를 적절히 사용하세요. 구체적인 예시를 추가하면 더 좋습니다.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think singing brings happiness because many Koreans enjoy singing when they receive good news or feel joyful. It helps people express their emotions and have fun.

× I really liked to singing

✓ I really liked singing

The verb 'like' is followed by the gerund form (verb + -ing), not the infinitive with 'to'. Therefore, 'liked to singing' is incorrect; it should be 'liked singing'.

× since I was middle school students

✓ since I was a middle school student

The subject 'I' is singular, so the noun referring to the person should also be singular. 'Students' is plural, which is incorrect here. It should be 'a middle school student'.

× I thought that my voice is really low

✓ I thought that my voice was really low

When reporting past thoughts, the verb tense should be backshifted to past tense. 'Is' should be changed to 'was' to maintain tense consistency.

× my family encouraged me for learning musical instruments

✓ my family encouraged me to learn musical instruments

The verb 'encourage' is followed by the object and then the infinitive form without 'for'. Using 'for learning' is incorrect; it should be 'to learn'.

× I've never learned singing

✓ I've never learned to sing

The verb 'learn' is typically followed by the infinitive form 'to sing', not the gerund 'singing'. Thus, 'learned singing' is incorrect.

× I learned about using, not playing the musical instrument

✓ I learned about using, not playing, the musical instrument

A comma is needed after 'playing' to separate the contrasting ideas clearly. Also, 'learned about using' is acceptable, but the sentence structure is awkward; however, the main issue is punctuation.

× there are lots of song has good lyrics for children

✓ there are lots of songs that have good lyrics for children

'Lots of' should be followed by a plural noun, so 'song' should be 'songs'. Also, 'has' should be 'have' to agree with the plural subject 'songs'.

× if my kids hear it, I think listening they can feel good mood

✓ if my kids hear it, I think listening to it can make them feel good mood

The phrase 'listening they can feel good mood' is ungrammatical. It should be 'listening to it can make them feel good mood' or better 'feel good'. Also, 'good mood' is better expressed as 'good mood' or 'happy'.

× lots of Korean like singing

✓ lots of Koreans like singing

'Lots of' should be followed by a plural noun. 'Korean' is singular; the plural form is 'Koreans'.

× when they have some good news

✓ when they have some good news

This sentence is correct; no preposition error here.

× So I think lots of people can enjoy it and then it can bring happiness to people

✓ So I think lots of people can enjoy it, and it can bring happiness to people

The phrase 'and then' is unnecessary here and disrupts sentence flow. Using 'and' alone is sufficient to connect the two clauses.