Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: तपाईंको जवाफमा केही व्याकरण र शब्द चयनमा सुधार आवश्यक छ। उदाहरणका लागि, 'different journals music' को सट्टा 'different genres of music' प्रयोग गर्नुहोस्। साथै, वाक्यहरूलाई छोटो र स्पष्ट बनाउन प्रयास गर्नुहोस्।

Ejemplo: I don't like singing because I think my voice is not very good. However, I enjoy listening to different genres of music, especially classic Hindi songs about love stories.

Sugerencia: तपाईंको जवाफमा वाक्य संरचना र शब्द चयन सुधार गर्नुपर्छ। 'while I hear a music' को सट्टा 'when I listen to music' प्रयोग गर्नुहोस्। साथै, वाक्यहरूलाई स्पष्ट र सुसंगत बनाउन लिंकिङ शब्दहरू प्रयोग गर्नुहोस्।

Ejemplo: No, I have never learned to sing professionally. But when I listen to music and understand the lyrics, I like to repeat them the next time. This way, I try to sing even though I am not trained.

Sugerencia: तपाईंको जवाफमा केही व्याकरण सुधार आवश्यक छ। 'my loved one' लाई 'my loved ones' बनाउन सकिन्छ। साथै, वाक्यहरूलाई छोटो र स्पष्ट बनाउन प्रयास गर्नुहोस्।

Ejemplo: I like to sing for my family and loved ones because when I feel close to someone, singing helps me express my feelings, even though I think my voice is not very good.

Sugerencia: तपाईंको जवाफमा धेरै व्याकरण र स्पष्टता सम्बन्धी समस्या छन्। 'uplift your pipes' जस्तो अभिव्यक्ति अस्पष्ट छ। वाक्यहरूलाई सरल र स्पष्ट बनाउन प्रयास गर्नुहोस् र उपयुक्त लिंकिङ शब्दहरू प्रयोग गर्नुहोस्।

Ejemplo: Yes, singing can bring happiness to people. When you are in a certain mood, listening to music that relates to you can definitely lift your spirits and make you feel happier.

× But I love to listen different journals music.

✓ But I love to listen to different genres of music.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' before the object. Also, 'journals music' is incorrect; the correct word is 'genres' when referring to types of music.

× Usually I love to hear a classic Hindi song that are related to love stories.

✓ Usually I love to hear classic Hindi songs that are related to love stories.

The subject 'songs' should be plural to agree with the plural verb 'are'. Also, 'a classic Hindi song that are' is incorrect because 'a' indicates singular but 'are' is plural; both should be plural for agreement.

× Oh no, I have never learned how to sing, but while I hear a music and if I guess the lyrics then I love to repeat the lyrics next time when I hear the same music.

✓ Oh no, I have never learned how to sing, but when I hear music and guess the lyrics, I love to repeat the lyrics the next time I hear the same music.

The phrase 'while I hear a music' is incorrect; 'music' is uncountable and does not need 'a'. Also, 'if I guess' is better as 'and guess' to show sequence. 'Next time when I hear' is better as 'the next time I hear' for clarity.

× In that way I try to sing but I have not learned by professional.

✓ In that way, I try to sing but I have not learned from a professional.

The preposition 'by' is incorrect here; the correct preposition is 'from' when indicating the source of learning.

× I like to sing a song for my family and my loved one because when I feel very attached with someone, I like to express myself with the way of singing.

✓ I like to sing songs for my family and my loved ones because when I feel very attached to someone, I like to express myself through singing.

'A song' should be plural 'songs' to match the general statement. 'Loved one' should be plural 'loved ones' to include more than one person. Also, 'attached with' should be 'attached to', and 'with the way of singing' is better expressed as 'through singing'.

× Even I think my voice is not so good enough.

✓ Even so, I think my voice is not good enough.

The phrase 'Even I think' is awkward; 'Even so' is a better transition. Also, 'not so good enough' is redundant; 'not good enough' is correct.

× Yes, of course, singing can bring the happiness to people because when you are on a on a certain mood and when the music that play related to you more than it absolutely will uplift your pipes and your happiness.

✓ Yes, of course, singing can bring happiness to people because when you are in a certain mood and the music that plays relates to you, it will absolutely uplift your spirits and your happiness.

'Bring the happiness' should be 'bring happiness' without 'the'. 'On a certain mood' should be 'in a certain mood'. 'Music that play' should be 'music that plays'. 'Related to you more than it' is unclear; corrected to 'relates to you'. 'Uplift your pipes' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'uplift your spirits'.