Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Ваш ответ содержит несколько грамматических ошибок и нечетких выражений, таких как "outlet your paint attention" и "when I think I reduce my stress". Рекомендуется использовать более точные и естественные выражения, а также избегать избыточности. Попробуйте строить предложения проще и логичнее.

Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and forget about my daily stress. Singing is a popular activity worldwide, and it allows me to express my emotions and feel happier.

Sugerencia: Ответ не совсем ясен и содержит ошибки в построении предложений, например, "I can say that I'm alone" и "learn how to think well". Рекомендуется отвечать более конкретно, использовать связующие слова и избегать неуместных выражений.

Ejemplo: I have not taken formal singing lessons, but I have learned a lot by watching tutorials on social media platforms like YouTube. These resources help me improve my singing skills at my own pace.

Sugerencia: Ответ хороший, но можно улучшить связность и убрать повторения, например, "a a small public". Также стоит использовать более точные выражения и связующие слова для плавности речи.

Ejemplo: I would like to sing for a small audience, such as my family and close friends, because they are important to me. Singing for them can help us relax and enjoy some quality time together.

Sugerencia: Ответ содержит повторения и нечеткие выражения, например, "singing symbolize and a state with good qualities". Рекомендуется использовать более ясные и логичные формулировки, а также избегать тавтологии.

Ejemplo: Definitely, singing brings happiness to people because it is a universal activity that expresses positive emotions. In today's fast-paced world, singing can help people feel joyful and relaxed.

× Singing is one of the most popular activity all over the world and it can be great way to outlet your paint attention and break free from your daily routine and responsibilities.

✓ Singing is one of the most popular activities all over the world and it can be a great way to outlet your paint attention and break free from your daily routine and responsibilities.

The noun 'activity' should be plural 'activities' because it refers to one among many popular activities. Also, 'great way' needs the article 'a' before it as it is a singular countable noun.

× it can be great way to outlet your paint attention and break free from your daily routine and responsibilities.

✓ it can be a great way to outlet your pent-up attention and break free from your daily routine and responsibilities.

The phrase 'outlet your paint attention' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'outlet your pent-up attention' or 'release your pent-up attention'. 'Paint' is a wrong word here, likely a typo for 'pent'. Also, 'outlet' is a noun; the verb form should be 'to release' or 'to let out'. However, since the instruction is to correct only grammar mistakes from the list, this is a lexical error and may be left as is.

× And when I think I reduce my stress.

✓ And when I sing, I reduce my stress.

The sentence lacks clarity and correct verb usage. 'When I think' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'when I sing' to match the topic. Also, the sentence structure is incomplete without a comma and subject-verb agreement.

× I can say that I'm alone.

✓ I can say that I learned on my own.

The phrase 'I'm alone' is incorrect in this context. The student likely means they learned by themselves. The sentence structure needs correction to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× I hope to see things to some social media platforms like YouTube, Telegram and et cetera.

✓ I hope to learn from some social media platforms like YouTube, Telegram, and so on.

The phrase 'see things to some social media platforms' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'from' when learning or obtaining information from platforms. Also, 'et cetera' is better replaced with 'and so on' in spoken English.

× Because in nowadays, in today's fastest world, thanks to social media, you can learn everything, including the music and singing.

✓ Because nowadays, in today's fast world, thanks to social media, you can learn everything, including music and singing.

The phrase 'in nowadays' is incorrect; 'nowadays' is an adverb and does not need 'in'. Also, 'fastest world' should be 'fast world' to describe the current pace.

× And there are a lot of platforms that can enable and assist me to learn how to think well.

✓ And there are a lot of platforms that can enable and assist me to learn how to sing well.

The phrase 'learn how to think well' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'learn how to sing well' to match the topic. This is a pronoun and word choice error.

× I want to sing for a a small public, for example my family or loved ones because these individuals are very close to me and when I think I also can break them from their daily routines and just have a good time with them.

✓ I want to sing for a small audience, for example my family or loved ones because these individuals are very close to me and when I sing I can also help them break from their daily routines and just have a good time with them.

The phrase 'a small public' is incorrect; 'audience' is the correct singular noun. Also, 'when I think' should be 'when I sing' to make sense. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× Definitely yes, because you know, the singing is one of the most popular activities all over the world, worldwide.

✓ Definitely yes, because you know, singing is one of the most popular activities all over the world, worldwide.

The article 'the' before 'singing' is unnecessary here. 'Singing' as a general activity does not need 'the'.

× And this singing symbolize and a state with good qualities such as happiness and because it can be very crucial and necessary to think in today's rapidly changing world.

✓ And this singing symbolizes a state with good qualities such as happiness because it can be very crucial and necessary to sing in today's rapidly changing world.

The verb 'symbolize' should be in third person singular 'symbolizes' to agree with singular subject 'singing'. The phrase 'and a state' is incorrect; it should be 'a state'. Also, 'to think' should be 'to sing' to fit the context. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity.