Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 你的回答中有语法错误和重复词汇，表达不够自然。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并避免重复。

Ejemplo: No, I don't like singing because I'm not good at it, and I usually avoid singing in public.

Sugerencia: 回答语法混乱，表达不清晰。建议直接回答问题，并用简单句说明原因。

Ejemplo: No, I have never learned how to sing because I find it difficult and it requires a lot of musical knowledge.

Sugerencia: 回答不连贯，信息不明确。建议明确指出想为谁唱歌，并简要说明原因。

Ejemplo: I would like to sing for my sister because she loves music and is very good at singing.

Sugerencia: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够流畅。建议简洁表达观点，并用连词连接句子。

Ejemplo: Yes, absolutely. Although I'm not good at singing, I believe songs carry emotions and can make people feel happy and comforted.

× Actually, I don't like singing because because I don't be, I'm not good at this.

✓ Actually, I don't like singing because I'm not good at it.

句中“don't be”用法错误，正确表达应为“I'm not good at it”，表示“我不擅长它”。“because because”重复，应去掉一个。

× So I think I'm not usually saying.

✓ So I think I don't usually sing.

“I'm not usually saying”用法不当，表达喜欢唱歌应使用动词“sing”，且一般现在时态，故改为“I don't usually sing”。

× Yes, actually not because I'm not good at singing so also I don't have ever learned to have to sing.

✓ No, actually not, because I'm not good at singing and I have never learned how to sing.

句子结构混乱，时态使用错误。应使用现在完成时“have never learned”，且表达“学唱歌”应用“learned how to sing”。

× This is so difficult for me and this have a lot of music knowledge.

✓ This is so difficult for me and it requires a lot of musical knowledge.

“this have”主谓不一致，应为“it requires”。“music knowledge”应改为“musical knowledge”更合适。

× I think thing for who I think is my sister because ** *** always stay in.

✓ I think the person I want to sing for is my sister because she always stays in.

“thing for who”表达错误，应为“the person I want to sing for”。“** ***”应为“she”，“stay”应加第三人称单数“stays”。

× She is good at singing. So I think it's great people in singing.

✓ She is good at singing. So I think she is great at singing.

“it's great people in singing”表达不清，主语和谓语不匹配，应改为“she is great at singing”。

× Yes, absolutely. Uh, actually, I don't uh actually I'm not a good at singing, but I think the song is has emotion and it could give people happy and something else like emotions.

✓ Yes, absolutely. Actually, I'm not good at singing, but I think songs have emotion and they can make people happy and feel other emotions.

“I'm not a good at singing”中冠词“a”多余，应去掉。“the song is has emotion”语法错误，应为“songs have emotion”。“give people happy”应改为“make people happy”。