Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: حاول تتكلم بشكل أكثر طبيعية وابتعد عن التكرار. استخدم جمل قصيرة وواضحة، ووضح رأيك بشكل مباشر مع أمثلة محددة. مثلاً، بدلاً من قول "my voice is awful"، ممكن تقول "I don't enjoy singing because I feel my voice isn't good enough."

Ejemplo: No, I don't like singing because I feel my voice isn't good enough. However, I enjoy listening to my mother sing because her voice is very soothing and relaxing.

Sugerencia: حاول تستخدم روابط بين الجمل لتكون إجابتك أكثر ترابطاً، ووضح التفاصيل بشكل أدق. مثلاً، بدلاً من قول "She was incredible in singing"، قل "She was an incredible singer, and my dad always enjoyed listening to her."

Ejemplo: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was a child. My mother, who is an incredible singer, taught me. My father also loved listening to her sing.

Sugerencia: حاول تبني إجابتك بشكل أوضح مع جمل مترابطة. استخدم روابط مثل "because" أو "so" لتوضيح السبب. كما يجب أن تكون الجمل مفهومة وواضحة. مثلاً، "I want to sing for my mother because she is incredible and has always supported me."

Ejemplo: I want to sing for my mother because she is an incredible and loving person. She always supports me, and singing for her would be a way to show my appreciation.

Sugerencia: إجابتك غير واضحة وتتعارض مع الفكرة العامة. حاول تعبر عن رأيك بشكل إيجابي أو سلبي مع توضيح السبب. مثلاً، "Yes, I think singing can bring happiness because it helps people express their emotions."

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it allows them to express their feelings and connect with others emotionally.

× I just sometimes like to hear people sings because it's as relaxing.

✓ I just sometimes like to hear people sing because it's relaxing.

The verb 'hear' is followed by the base form of the verb without 's' or 'ing'. 'People' is plural, so the verb after 'hear' should be 'sing' not 'sings'. Also, 'as relaxing' is incorrect; it should be 'relaxing' without 'as'.

× And my mom's.

✓ And my mom's too.

The sentence fragment 'And my mom's.' is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'too' clarifies that the speaker also likes hearing their mom sing. Pronouns or possessive forms need to be used properly to complete the thought.

× Yeah, I remember my mom taught me how to sing when I was a kid.

✓ Yeah, I remember my mom taught me how to sing when I was a kid.

This sentence is correct in past tense; no correction needed.

× She was incredible in singing.

✓ She was incredible at singing.

The correct preposition to use with 'incredible' when referring to a skill is 'at', not 'in'.

× Even my dad loved to hear her sing.

✓ Even my dad loved to hear her sing.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× I want to sing for my mother about how incredible and the great mother.

✓ I want to sing for my mother about how incredible and great she is as a mother.

The original sentence is incomplete and awkward. Adding 'she is as a mother' completes the thought and improves clarity.

× How is she?

✓ She really makes me feel like singing and dancing at the same time.

'How is she?' is out of context and unclear. The intended meaning seems to be expressed in the next sentence, so it should be combined and rephrased for clarity.

× She really makes me feel one of sing and dance at the same time.

✓ She really makes me feel like singing and dancing at the same time.

The phrase 'one of sing and dance' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'feel like singing and dancing'.

× I love her so much.

✓ I love her so much.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× No, singing can't bring happiness to people, but happiness can come and go so.

✓ No, singing can't bring happiness to people, but happiness can come and go.

The word 'so' at the end is unnecessary and incorrect in this context. Removing it makes the sentence grammatically correct and clearer.