Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với một câu chủ đề, sau đó giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể và mạch lạc. Hãy tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn để câu trả lời hiệu quả hơn.

Ejemplo: I don't really enjoy singing myself, but I appreciate it when others sing for me. I usually pay close attention and feel encouraged by their performance.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng ngữ pháp và tránh lặp từ không cần thiết. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và giải thích rõ ràng cảm nhận của bạn về việc học hát, sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have taken singing lessons before, but I found it quite difficult because I don't think I have much talent. Therefore, I sometimes feel like giving up.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn và sử dụng thì đúng. Bạn nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sau đó bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc.

Ejemplo: I have always wanted to sing for my family since I was a child. I learned some songs from YouTube and social media to bring them happiness.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên hoàn thiện câu trả lời với cấu trúc rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể để làm rõ quan điểm của bạn.

Ejemplo: In my opinion, singing can definitely bring happiness to people. The meaningful lyrics and melodies can lift their spirits and make them feel joyful.

× I don't really love singing, but when people who sing for me, I will very concerned.

✓ I don't really love singing, but when people sing for me, I am very concerned.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'will very concerned' which is not a correct verb form. The verb 'to be' should be in the present tense 'am' to match the context. Also, 'when people who sing for me' is incomplete; it should be 'when people sing for me'. The verb 'sing' should be in the base form after 'when'.

× I will very concentrate about them and also always listen to them and give them some courage.

✓ I will concentrate very much on them and also always listen to them and give them some courage.

The phrase 'will very concentrate about them' is incorrect. 'Concentrate' is a verb that requires the preposition 'on' and 'very' should modify 'much' or 'intensely'. The correct phrase is 'concentrate very much on them'.

× Yes, I have ever learned how to sing in a class, but sometimes I feel that it's very difficult for me because I'm not have a singing talent.

✓ Yes, I have learned how to sing in a class, but sometimes I feel that it's very difficult for me because I don't have a singing talent.

The phrase 'have ever learned' is incorrect; 'ever' is not used with present perfect in this context. Also, 'I'm not have' is grammatically wrong; it should be 'I don't have'.

× So I will have I don't want to do it anymore.

✓ So I don't want to do it anymore.

The phrase 'I will have I don't want to do it anymore' is ungrammatical and confusing. The intended meaning is present desire, so 'I don't want to do it anymore' is correct.

× Actually is my family when I were was a child, I always want to sing for them and brings them the happiness to some songs I have learned on YouTube or some social platform.

✓ Actually, it is my family. When I was a child, I always wanted to sing for them and bring them happiness with some songs I learned on YouTube or some social platforms.

The original sentence has multiple errors: missing subject 'it' in 'Actually is my family', incorrect verb forms 'were was' (should be 'was'), tense inconsistency 'want' should be past 'wanted', and 'brings' should be base form 'bring' after 'and'. Also, 'to some songs' is incorrect; 'with some songs' is better.

× Just from my perspective, singing really can bring happiness for people.

✓ Just from my perspective, singing really can bring happiness to people.

The verb 'bring happiness' is usually followed by the preposition 'to' rather than 'for'. So 'bring happiness to people' is correct.

× Just about the lyrics or songs about their meanings can brings people and boost their moods and always it can bring joy or make.

✓ Just the lyrics or songs about their meanings can bring people joy and boost their moods, and they can always bring joy or make them happy.

The verb 'brings' does not agree with the plural subject 'lyrics or songs'; it should be 'bring'. The sentence is incomplete and unclear; adding 'joy' and 'make them happy' clarifies the meaning.