Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is quite detailed and personal, which is good. However, it could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy such as "never stopped to do it"; instead, say "I've been singing continuously since then." Also, try to use more natural expressions like "gives me the most beautiful feeling" instead of "creates me the most beautiful sensation."

Ejemplo: Yes, I love singing because I've been doing it since I was five years old. It always gives me a wonderful feeling and helps me relax.

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and informative, but it could be more concise and natural. For example, instead of "right now in the adult life," say "even now as an adult." Also, avoid unnecessary words like "a lot of things"; be more specific or say "many techniques."

Ejemplo: Yes, I have taken singing lessons since I was a child. My first teacher was a famous Romanian singer who taught me many useful techniques, and even now as an adult, I remember her advice when I sing.

Sugerencia: Your answer conveys your message but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. For example, "in the past four very big audience" is unclear; you could say "in front of large audiences." Also, "at the moment" is better as "nowadays." Try to make your sentences smoother and more natural.

Ejemplo: I used to perform in front of large audiences when I was in a band. However, nowadays I prefer to sing just for myself.

Sugerencia: Your answer shows enthusiasm but has grammatical mistakes and some redundancy. For example, "to the people who sings" should be "to people who sing," and "to the people who listening" should be "to those who listen." Also, avoid repeating "gift" twice. Try to use more natural phrasing and correct grammar.

Ejemplo: I'm absolutely sure that singing brings happiness both to those who sing and to those who listen. I believe it's a wonderful gift from God.

× I started to sing when I was 5 and since then I never stopped to do it.

✓ I started to sing when I was 5 and since then I have never stopped doing it.

The verb 'stop' is followed by the gerund form when indicating cessation of an activity. Therefore, 'stopped to do it' should be corrected to 'stopped doing it' to be grammatically correct.

× I always remember about the things she taught me.

✓ I always remember the things she taught me.

The verb 'remember' does not require the preposition 'about' when directly referring to something recalled. Removing 'about' makes the sentence correct.

× I used to sing in the past four very big audience.

✓ I used to sing in front of four very big audiences in the past.

The word 'audience' is countable and should be pluralized when referring to multiple groups. Also, the preposition 'in' is incorrect here; 'in front of' or 'for' is more appropriate.

× I'm 100% sure that singing can bring happiness to the people, to the people who sings, but also for the people who listening.

✓ I'm 100% sure that singing can bring happiness to the people, to the people who sing, but also to the people who listen.

The verb 'sing' and 'listen' should be in the base form to agree with the plural subject 'people who'. Also, 'for' should be replaced with 'to' for parallel structure.

× I think singing is a very big, is a huge gift, gift God gives us.

✓ I think singing is a very big, a huge gift that God gives us.

The sentence needs the article 'a' before 'huge gift' and the relative pronoun 'that' to connect the clause properly. Also, the repetition of 'gift' is unnecessary and should be removed.