Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to use correct verb forms and avoid redundancy. Also, make your answer more natural by using linking words and clearer expressions. For example, instead of 'I like sing', say 'I like singing'. Use linking words like 'because' to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like singing because it helps me release tension and reduce stress. Also, singing allows me to express my emotions and feelings effectively.

Sugerencia: Improve sentence structure and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, avoid repeating the same idea twice. For example, instead of repeating 'Singing for me is quite helpful to release stress', you can combine ideas more smoothly.

Ejemplo: I haven't learned singing professionally by attending a school or institution, but I have improved my skills by watching videos on YouTube and social media. Singing also helps me relieve stress.

Sugerencia: Avoid filler words like 'you know' and unclear phrases such as 'I love me to see'. Use clear and concise sentences with proper linking words. Also, try to avoid repetition and keep the answer within 5 sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer to sing only for myself because I'm not very good at it, and I feel embarrassed singing in front of others. Singing helps me relieve stress and manage my emotions, especially when I'm alone.

Sugerencia: Make your answer more coherent by using linking words and clearer examples. Avoid unnecessary phrases like 'Excuse me'. Also, correct minor grammar mistakes and be more specific in your explanation.

Ejemplo: Yes, definitely. Singing can bring happiness to people, especially when attending a concert. If the song relates to someone's emotions or is enjoyable, it can create a joyful experience for the audience.

× Yes, I like sing.

✓ Yes, I like singing.

The verb 'like' is followed by the gerund form '-ing' when expressing enjoyment of an activity. Therefore, 'sing' should be corrected to 'singing'. This is a common rule in English grammar for verbs of preference.

× The reason is when I sing I felt like the tension will release and it helps to reduce stress.

✓ The reason is when I sing I feel like the tension is released and it helps to reduce stress.

The sentence mixes past tense 'felt' with present tense context. Since the action is habitual, present tense 'feel' is appropriate. Also, 'will release' should be in passive present form 'is released' to match the meaning. Consistency in tense is important for clarity.

× Also singing it's like you're putting all of your emotions and feel.

✓ Also, singing is like you're putting all of your emotions and feelings into it.

The sentence lacks clarity and correct pronoun use. 'It's' should be 'is', and 'feel' should be the noun 'feelings'. Adding 'into it' clarifies the object of the emotions. Proper pronoun and noun forms improve sentence clarity.

× I haven't learned singing in a professional way like attending a school or any institution.

✓ I haven't learned to sing in a professional way like attending a school or any institution.

The verb 'learn' is followed by the infinitive 'to sing' rather than the gerund 'singing' when referring to acquiring a skill. Using 'to sing' is grammatically correct here.

× I learned how to sing through watching YouTube, TV or on social media.

✓ I learned how to sing by watching YouTube, TV, or social media.

The preposition 'through' is less appropriate here; 'by' is used to indicate the means of learning. Also, 'on social media' is simplified to 'social media' for parallel structure.

× Sometimes when I'm alone, I love me to see.

✓ Sometimes when I'm alone, I love to see myself.

The phrase 'I love me to see' is incorrect. The reflexive pronoun 'myself' should be used with 'see' to indicate the subject and object are the same person.

× I love to sing for myself.

✓ I love to sing for myself.

This sentence is correct and requires no change.

× Let's say you really are attending a concert.

✓ Let's say you are really attending a concert.

The adverb 'really' should be placed before the verb 'are' for correct sentence structure and natural flow.

× It it brings happiness to us, especially if that song relates to someone in our emotion or it's a good song.

✓ It brings happiness to us, especially if that song relates to someone's emotions or it's a good song.

The repeated 'it it' is a typo and should be corrected to 'it'. Also, 'someone in our emotion' is incorrect; it should be 'someone's emotions' to indicate possession and plural form.