Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is heartfelt but could be clearer and more natural. Try to avoid repetition and grammatical errors, and keep your sentences concise. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why you enjoy singing, and give a specific example.

Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy singing, although I consider myself just a bathroom singer. I don't have a perfect voice, but singing makes me happy, especially when I'm cooking. It helps me relax and enjoy the moment.

Sugerencia: Your answer needs to be more structured and grammatically correct. Avoid repeating words unnecessarily and use linking words to make your response coherent. Clearly state your experience and future intentions regarding learning to sing.

Ejemplo: I have never taken singing lessons before, but I would like to learn in the future. If I get the chance to find a good teacher, I will definitely take singing classes to improve my skills.

Sugerencia: Your answer is meaningful but could be clearer and more concise. Try to avoid confusing phrases and use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Also, correct grammar and sentence structure will improve clarity.

Ejemplo: I want to sing for my husband because he often sings for me. I plan to surprise him on his birthday, which I think will make him very happy.

Sugerencia: Your answer has good ideas but is unclear due to repetition and grammatical errors. Try to express your thoughts clearly and use linking words to organize your points. Be specific about how singing brings happiness and benefits people.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people we love. Singing helps us feel joyful and relaxed, boosts our confidence, and can relieve stress after a busy day.

× I do not have perfect vocal cord, I do not have perfect voice to sing well.

✓ I do not have perfect vocal cords, I do not have a perfect voice to sing well.

The word 'vocal cord' should be plural 'vocal cords' because humans have two vocal cords. Also, 'perfect voice' needs the article 'a' before it to be grammatically correct.

× But I love to singing that makes me really happy when I feel enjoy like when I'm cooking at that time I love to singing a song so.

✓ But I love singing; that makes me really happy when I feel enjoyment, like when I'm cooking. At that time, I love singing a song.

The verb 'love' should be followed by the gerund form 'singing' not the infinitive 'to singing'. Also, 'feel enjoy' is incorrect; it should be 'feel enjoyment' or 'enjoy'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

Both 'learnt' and 'learned' are acceptable past participles, but 'learned' is more common in Canadian English.

× I never tried to how to learn a thing, but yeah, maybe in the future.

✓ I have never tried to learn anything, but yeah, maybe in the future.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and unnecessary words. 'Tried to how to learn a thing' is incorrect; it should be 'tried to learn anything'. Also, present perfect 'have never tried' fits better here.

× I don't know how to get someone who actually teach me how to sing, but if I get a chance, definitely I will prefer to sing a song.

✓ I don't know how to find someone who can actually teach me how to sing, but if I get a chance, I will definitely try to sing a song.

'Get someone who actually teach me' is incorrect; it should be 'find someone who can actually teach me'. Also, 'prefer to sing' is awkward here; 'try to sing' fits better. The adverb 'definitely' is better placed before the verb.

× I want to sing for my husband because he usually sing for me so I want to give him a surprise on his birthday as dad me I think that make him so happy so that's why I want to sing for him.

✓ I want to sing for my husband because he usually sings for me. I want to give him a surprise on his birthday as a dad to me. I think that will make him very happy, so that's why I want to sing for him.

The verb 'sing' should be 'sings' to agree with the third person singular subject 'he'. Also, 'make' should be 'will make' to indicate future effect. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammar.

× Yes, singing can bring a happiness to the people that we love because if we sing a song then we feel like, feel, enjoy and it it.

✓ Yes, singing can bring happiness to the people we love because when we sing a song, we feel enjoyment and happiness.

'Happiness' is an uncountable noun and does not need the article 'a'. The sentence is also rephrased for clarity and to remove repetition.

× It helps to make up, make up, boost confidence as well as to refuse the person after a busy schedule.

✓ It helps to cheer up, boost confidence, and refresh a person after a busy schedule.

The phrase 'make up, make up' is incorrect and unclear. 'Refuse the person' is incorrect; likely intended 'refresh the person'. The sentence is corrected for meaning and grammar.