Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to organise your answer more clearly by starting with a direct response, then adding specific reasons. Avoid unclear phrases like 'reduce my stress label' and aim for more natural expressions. Also, keep your sentences concise and avoid redundancy.

Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy singing, especially karaoke, because I love music. Singing well makes me feel like a real performer and helps me relieve stress, which is very enjoyable.

Sugerencia: Focus on clear sentence structure and correct grammar. Avoid confusing phrases like 'I would like to eat' when you mean 'I would like to learn'. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and express your wishes clearly.

Ejemplo: No, I have never learned how to sing professionally, but if I had the chance, I would like to take lessons because I want to improve my singing skills and become a better singer.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and avoid hesitation sounds like 'MMM'. Use correct plural forms and clearer expressions. For example, say 'my grandparents' and explain why you want to sing for them with specific reasons.

Ejemplo: I usually want to sing for my grandparents because they always support me and enjoy listening to my songs.

Sugerencia: Improve sentence clarity and grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Replace vague phrases like 'left my mood' with clearer expressions such as 'lift my mood'.

Ejemplo: Yes, definitely. Whenever I listen to certain artists and songs, they make me feel relaxed and lift my mood. Therefore, music has the power to encourage and bring happiness to people.

× So when I sing some song good, I feel like I'm a singer and I reduce my stress label so which is absolutely lovely.

✓ So when I sing some songs well, I feel like I'm a singer and I reduce my stress level, which is absolutely lovely.

The phrase 'sing some song good' is incorrect because 'sing' should be followed by the plural noun 'songs' and the adverb 'well' to describe how the singing is done. Also, 'stress label' is a mistake; the correct phrase is 'stress level'. The sentence structure is improved by removing 'so' before 'which is absolutely lovely' to make it grammatically correct.

× No, I've never learned how to sing, but if I had a chance to learn it, I would like to eat because I want to be better singer than now, and if I could better singer it feel like a good.

✓ No, I've never learned how to sing, but if I had a chance to learn, I would like to because I want to be a better singer than now, and if I could be a better singer, it would feel good.

The phrase 'I would like to eat' is incorrect; it should be 'I would like to' followed by the verb 'learn' implied. 'Better singer' needs the article 'a' before it. The phrase 'if I could better singer it feel like a good' is ungrammatical; it should be 'if I could be a better singer, it would feel good' to use the correct verb forms and sentence structure.

× MMM. OK, I never thought about it but yeah, usually I want to sing for my grandparent because they always upload me when I sing songs.

✓ MMM. OK, I never thought about it but yeah, usually I want to sing for my grandparents because they always support me when I sing songs.

The word 'grandparent' should be plural 'grandparents' to match the plural pronoun 'they'. Also, 'upload me' is incorrect; the intended meaning is likely 'support me'. Using the correct pronoun and verb improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, definitely I think so because whenever I listen to some artist and songs which makes me feel relaxed and left my mood. So which is why absolutely music have power to encourage people to.

✓ Yes, definitely I think so because whenever I listen to some artists and songs, they make me feel relaxed and lift my mood. That is why music absolutely has the power to encourage people.

The phrase 'some artist and songs which makes me feel' is incorrect; 'artist' should be plural 'artists' to agree with 'songs', and the verb should be 'make' to agree with the plural subject. 'Left my mood' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'lift my mood'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity and grammatical correctness.