Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly answering the question and providing clear reasons. Avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like singing because my parents encouraged me to practice when I was young. As a result, I participated in many singing activities which helped me improve my skills.

Sugerencia: Your answer has repetition and grammatical mistakes. Try to use correct verb forms and avoid repeating words. Also, structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details using linking words.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have learned how to sing. My parents enrolled me in singing classes, and I have participated in many competitions and school performances to practice and improve.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and some redundancy. Use correct verb tenses and avoid repeating words. Also, try to link your ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: I want to sing for my mom because when I was young and lacked confidence, she always supported me. Singing for her is my way of showing gratitude.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains awkward phrasing. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use appropriate vocabulary. Also, avoid vague statements and explain your opinion with specific reasons.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it creates a joyful atmosphere and helps people express their emotions freely.

× Yes, I like singing because when I was young my parents wanted me to practicing singing, so I participated a lot of activities and the and the texts.

✓ Yes, I like singing because when I was young my parents wanted me to practice singing, so I participated in a lot of activities and the texts.

The verb 'practice' should be in its base form after 'wanted me to' because 'to' is followed by the base form of the verb, not the '-ing' form. Also, 'participated a lot of activities' is incorrect; it should be 'participated in a lot of activities' because 'participate' requires the preposition 'in' when referring to activities.

× Yes, I like singing because when I was young my parents wanted me to practicing singing, so I participated a lot of activities and the and the texts.

✓ Yes, I like singing because when I was young my parents wanted me to practice singing, so I participated in a lot of activities and the texts.

The verb 'participate' requires the preposition 'in' when referring to activities. Omitting 'in' is a preposition error.

× Yes, just like I said before, my parents sent me to a class to learn to learning how to singing well and actually I took part in many singing competition competitions and the school performance.

✓ Yes, just like I said before, my parents sent me to a class to learn how to sing well and actually I took part in many singing competitions and the school performance.

After 'to learn', the verb should be in base form 'how to sing', not 'to learning' or 'to singing'. Also, 'singing competition competitions' is redundant; 'singing competitions' is correct.

× Yes, just like I said before, my parents sent me to a class to learn to learning how to singing well and actually I took part in many singing competition competitions and the school performance.

✓ Yes, just like I said before, my parents sent me to a class to learn how to sing well and actually I took part in many singing competitions and the school performance.

The word 'competitions' should be plural to match 'many'. Also, 'competition competitions' is repetitive and incorrect.

× Actually I want to sing for my mom because when I was young, when I enrolled in classes, I actually lack of confidence, but my mom always support me and me. So I want to sing for my mom.

✓ Actually I want to sing for my mom because when I was young, when I enrolled in classes, I actually lacked confidence, but my mom always supported me. So I want to sing for my mom.

The phrase 'lack of confidence' should be 'lacked confidence' to match past tense. Also, 'support me and me' is incorrect and redundant; it should be 'supported me'. Pronouns are misused here.

× Actually I want to sing for my mom because when I was young, when I enrolled in classes, I actually lack of confidence, but my mom always support me and me. So I want to sing for my mom.

✓ Actually I want to sing for my mom because when I was young, when I enrolled in classes, I actually lacked confidence, but my mom always supported me. So I want to sing for my mom.

The verbs 'lack' and 'support' should be in past tense 'lacked' and 'supported' to agree with the past time frame 'when I was young' and 'enrolled'.

× Yes, absolutely, because as in singing can make people into a happiness atmosphere and we all know that seeing without boundaries. So I think absolutely can bring happiness to people.

✓ Yes, absolutely, because singing can create a happy atmosphere and we all know that singing has no boundaries. So I think it can absolutely bring happiness to people.

The original sentence has awkward structure and unclear phrases like 'as in singing' and 'make people into a happiness atmosphere'. Correcting to 'singing can create a happy atmosphere' improves clarity. Also, 'seeing without boundaries' is likely a typo for 'singing without boundaries'. The sentence needs proper subject and verb agreement and clearer expression.