Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có nội dung rõ ràng, tuy nhiên bạn nên tránh lặp từ và câu cuối hơi thiếu rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ.

Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy singing because my mother, who is a music teacher, taught me when I was young. Singing helps me relax and feel happy, especially after a tiring day. Therefore, I often spend my free time singing, which is my favorite hobby.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, câu không hoàn chỉnh và khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng thì đúng và câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lặp từ và thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I learned to sing basic songs from my mother when I was a little girl. She taught me for a few weeks, and singing those songs always made me feel happy and delighted.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng tốt nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt chưa tự nhiên. Bạn nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và dùng từ phù hợp hơn để diễn đạt cảm xúc và lý do cụ thể.

Ejemplo: Honestly, I am an introvert, so I usually sing for my mom because she is very supportive. Recently, I prefer singing for my best friend because she listens carefully and makes me feel a strong sense of belonging and comfort.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng tốt nhưng có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ dùng chưa chính xác. Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp, câu rõ ràng và có liên kết logic giữa các ý.

Ejemplo: From my perspective, I am convinced that singing can help people feel relaxed and happy after a hard day. For example, singing their favorite songs can improve their mood and reduce stress. Moreover, it can remind them of special memories from the past.

× Therefore, I often spend my free time singing, my favorite.

✓ Therefore, I often spend my free time singing, my favorite activity.

The original sentence ends abruptly with 'my favorite' which is incomplete. Adding 'activity' clarifies the meaning and completes the sentence structure.

× Yes of course when I was a little girl I have taught some basic songs by my mom for couples of weeks and this song is basic and it's make me feel so happy and delighted to sing it.

✓ Yes, of course, when I was a little girl, my mom taught me some basic songs for a couple of weeks, and this song is basic and it makes me feel so happy and delighted to sing it.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'have taught' instead of simple past 'taught' to describe a past event. Also, 'couples of weeks' should be 'a couple of weeks'. 'It's make' should be 'it makes' to agree with the singular subject.

× My mom want to.

✓ My mom wants to.

The verb 'want' must be conjugated as 'wants' to agree with the third person singular subject 'My mom'.

× To be honest, I'm an introvert person in the part I can sing for my for my mom because they're very supportive.

✓ To be honest, I'm an introverted person; in that part, I can sing for my mom because she is very supportive.

'Introvert person' should be 'introverted person' (adjective form). 'In the part' is unclear and should be 'in that part'. 'They're' is plural but refers to 'my mom' which is singular, so it should be 'she is'.

× However, recently I prefer singing for my bestie because she can listen to me careful and make me feel a song, a strong sense of belonging and comfort.

✓ However, recently I prefer singing for my bestie because she can listen to me carefully and make me feel a strong sense of belonging and comfort through the song.

'Listen to me careful' should be 'listen to me carefully' (adverb form). The phrase 'make me feel a song' is incorrect; it should be 'make me feel a strong sense of belonging and comfort through the song' to clarify meaning.

× From my perspective, I'm totally convinced that with idea because singing can have them feel relaxed and delayed after a hard day.

✓ From my perspective, I'm totally convinced of this idea because singing can help them feel relaxed and delighted after a hard day.

'Convinced that with idea' is incorrect; it should be 'convinced of this idea'. 'Can have them feel' is incorrect; 'can help them feel' is correct. 'Delayed' is a wrong word here; 'delighted' is the intended meaning.

× For example, singing their favorite song can leave their mood and reduce stress.

✓ For example, singing their favorite song can lift their mood and reduce stress.

'Leave their mood' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'lift their mood' meaning to improve mood.

× Moreover, it can remind them a special memory in the past.

✓ Moreover, it can remind them of a special memory from the past.

The verb 'remind' requires the preposition 'of' after the object. Also, 'in the past' is better expressed as 'from the past' in this context.