Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is good but try to avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. For example, instead of repeating 'I really love singing' twice, you can combine ideas and use connectors like 'because' and 'therefore'.

Ejemplo: I really love singing because it helps me refresh and improves my mood by releasing stress. Since singing is related to music, which I enjoy a lot, it increases my happiness and makes me feel joyful.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Use correct verb forms and avoid repeating the same idea. Also, use linking words like 'however' to contrast ideas clearly.

Ejemplo: No, I haven't learned to sing professionally. However, I often sing alone, like a bathroom singer, because I enjoy singing and it helps improve my mood.

Sugerencia: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains some awkward phrases. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid unnecessary words. Use linking words to organize your answer logically.

Ejemplo: I want to sing for everyone, but since I don't have a great voice, I usually sing for myself. I don't judge my voice and just go with the flow because singing refreshes my mood and body, which I really enjoy.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use correct prepositions and verb forms. Also, use linking words like 'because' and 'therefore' to make your answer coherent.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it is a form of music, and music brings joy to our lives. It refreshes people's moods, relieves stress, and increases happiness. Therefore, singing is very important.

× I really love singing because it is one of the way that helps to refresh me, it improves my mood and releases my stress.

✓ I really love singing because it is one of the ways that helps to refresh me, it improves my mood and releases my stress.

The phrase 'one of the way' is incorrect because 'one of the' should be followed by a plural noun. The correct phrase is 'one of the ways'. This is a singular and plural issue.

× And also singing is related with the music so I love music that's why I really enjoy singing because it increases my happiness.

✓ And also singing is related to music, so I love music; that's why I really enjoy singing because it increases my happiness.

The phrase 'related with' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'related to'. Also, 'the music' should be 'music' without 'the' here. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and article errors.

× No, I haven't learned it professionally, but I've always just sang on my own as a bathroom singer because I really love singing and improving my moods.

✓ No, I haven't learned it professionally, but I've always just sung on my own as a bathroom singer because I really love singing and improving my moods.

The verb 'sang' is the simple past tense, but after 'have' or 'have always', the past participle 'sung' should be used. This is a past tense issue.

× But I haven't tried it professionally or got to learn it in a singing store.

✓ But I haven't tried it professionally or gotten to learn it in a singing school.

The phrase 'got to learn it in a singing store' is incorrect. 'Got' should be 'gotten' (past participle) and 'singing store' is incorrect; the correct term is 'singing school'. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and vocabulary.

× I really want to sing for everyone but I don't have a great voice so I love singing for myself because I am my dressed self and I don't judge for my voice but I go with the flow and singing really makes my mood and body freshened up.

✓ I really want to sing for everyone, but I don't have a great voice, so I love singing for myself because I am my true self and I don't judge my voice; I just go with the flow, and singing really makes my mood and body feel refreshed.

The phrase 'I am my dressed self' is unclear and likely incorrect; 'my true self' is more appropriate. Also, 'judge for my voice' should be 'judge my voice' without 'for'. 'Freshened up' should be 'feel refreshed' to correctly describe the effect. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and adjectives.

× I really enjoy singing be.

✓ I really enjoy singing.

The word 'be' at the end is unnecessary and incorrect, causing a sentence structure error. Removing 'be' corrects the sentence.