Singing— Part 1 Informe
Conversación
Part 1
Examinador
Do you like singing? Why?
Candidato
Yes, I like singing because it makes me relax and when I feel bad it can help me more happy.
Examinador
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Candidato
No, because I think everyone can sing. Uh, but if they want to practice their voice, they can learn about how to sing. That's one.
Examinador
Who do you want to sing for?
Candidato
I think I want to sing for myself because I'm not confident to sing for everyone. Listen.
Examinador
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Candidato
No, I don't think singing can bring happiness to people because when you are sad you very sad, not sad. Normal you singing is not better.
Evaluación
Total
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn khá ngắn và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp cũng như cách dùng từ chưa chính xác. Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn, tránh lặp từ và diễn đạt rõ ràng hơn để thể hiện ý một cách hiệu quả.
Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax and lifts my mood when I'm feeling down.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp hơn và tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không cần thiết như 'Uh' hay 'That's one'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn để người nghe dễ hiểu.
Ejemplo: No, I haven't taken any singing lessons because I believe everyone can sing naturally, but some people may choose to learn techniques to improve their voice.
Who do you want to sing for?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cần tránh dùng từ không cần thiết như 'Listen' và nên mở rộng câu trả lời để làm rõ hơn cảm xúc của bạn.
Ejemplo: I prefer to sing for myself because I lack confidence to perform in front of others.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Puntuación: 40.0Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên diễn đạt ý kiến một cách rõ ràng, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lặp từ.
Ejemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it allows them to express their emotions and feel more positive.
Gramática
× Yes, I like singing because it makes me relax and when I feel bad it can help me more happy.
✓ Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and when I feel bad it can make me happier.
The verb 'makes' should be followed by the base form 'relax' not 'me relax' as an object plus verb. Also, 'help me more happy' is incorrect; the correct form is 'make me happier' because 'make' is followed by an object and an adjective in comparative form to express increased happiness.
× No, because I think everyone can sing. Uh, but if they want to practice their voice, they can learn about how to sing. That's one.
✓ No, because I think everyone can sing. Uh, but if they want to practice their voice, they can learn how to sing. That's one.
The phrase 'learn about how to sing' is incorrect; the correct form is 'learn how to sing' without 'about'. This is a common error in preposition usage.
× I think I want to sing for myself because I'm not confident to sing for everyone. Listen.
✓ I think I want to sing for myself because I'm not confident to sing for everyone.
The word 'Listen' at the end is unnecessary and does not fit the sentence context. It should be removed to maintain clarity and correctness.
× No, I don't think singing can bring happiness to people because when you are sad you very sad, not sad. Normal you singing is not better.
✓ No, I don't think singing can bring happiness to people because when you are very sad, singing does not help. Normally, singing is not better.
The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. 'You very sad, not sad' is incorrect; it should be 'you are very sad'. 'Normal you singing is not better' is unclear; it should be 'Normally, singing is not better' to express the intended meaning clearly.
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