Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting grammar and making it more natural. Avoid redundancy like repeating 'I like singing' and 'I love singing'. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, instead of 'After weekends, I usually sing songs in alone or with my friends', say 'After the weekends, I usually sing alone or with my friends because it helps me relax.'

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy singing very much because it helps me relax and stay calm under pressure. After the weekends, I usually sing alone or with my friends, as it is a great way to express my emotions.

Sugerencia: Your answer needs clarity and better structure. Avoid repeating ideas and improve grammar. Use linking words to make your answer coherent. For example, say 'No, I haven't formally learned to sing. I have learned naturally since childhood, and I have memories, photographs, and videos of me singing as a child.'

Ejemplo: No, I haven't formally learned how to sing. I have learned naturally since my childhood, and I even have photographs and videos of me singing when I was young.

Sugerencia: Your answer should be clearer and grammatically correct. Avoid vague phrases like 'it's been a lot to me'. Use linking words to connect ideas. For example, say 'I want to sing for my friend because she means a lot to me. Last month, I sang a song for her at her birthday party, and she looked very happy.'

Ejemplo: I want to sing for my friend because she means a lot to me. Last month, I sang a song for her at her birthday party, and she looked very happy when I was singing.

Sugerencia: Your answer is repetitive and incomplete. Avoid repeating phrases and finish your sentences. Use linking words to explain your ideas clearly. For example, say 'Yes, definitely. Singing brings happiness to people because it is a great way to express feelings and talents. Moreover, it helps people feel relaxed and joyful.'

Ejemplo: Yes, definitely. Singing brings happiness to people because it is a great way to express feelings and talents. Moreover, it helps people feel relaxed and joyful.

× After weekends, I usually sing songs in alone or with my friends.

✓ After weekends, I usually sing songs alone or with my friends.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used before 'alone'. The correct phrase is 'sing songs alone' without any preposition. Using 'in alone' is grammatically incorrect.

× It's a best way to express emotions.

✓ It's the best way to express emotions.

The phrase 'a best way' is incorrect because 'best' is a superlative adjective and requires the definite article 'the' instead of the indefinite article 'a'.

× I learn from that.

✓ I learned from that.

The sentence refers to a past experience, so the verb 'learn' should be in the past tense 'learned' to match the context.

× I learn naturally and I sing songs from my childhood.

✓ I learned naturally and I sang songs from my childhood.

The verbs 'learn' and 'sing' should be in the past tense 'learned' and 'sang' because the sentence talks about past events.

× I also have memory when I was was child I sing songs and I also have memory of it.

✓ I also have memories from when I was a child; I sang songs and I also have memories of it.

The original sentence has repetition ('was was'), missing article ('a child'), and run-on structure. Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I also have photograph and videos.

✓ I also have photographs and videos.

The noun 'photograph' should be plural 'photographs' to agree with 'videos' and to indicate more than one item.

× Last month I sing song for her on her birthday party.

✓ Last month I sang a song for her on her birthday party.

The verb 'sing' should be in past tense 'sang' to match the time reference 'Last month'. Also, 'a song' is the correct phrase.

× She is looking so happy when I was singing songs for her.

✓ She looked so happy when I was singing songs for her.

The main clause should be in past tense 'looked' to agree with the subordinate clause 'when I was singing' which is in past continuous tense.

× it's best way to express your ability and your feelings.

✓ it's the best way to express your ability and your feelings.

The phrase 'best way' requires the definite article 'the' before it to be grammatically correct.