Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答时语句较为冗长且有较多口头语，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更自然流畅的表达。

Ejemplo: Yes, I really love singing. When I was a child, I often went to karaoke with my parents, and my mom taught me her favorite songs. Since then, I have enjoyed singing and listening to music on YouTube.

Sugerencia: 回答不够连贯，存在语法错误和口头语，建议使用完整句子，清晰表达观点，并减少口头语。

Ejemplo: No, I haven't learned to sing professionally, but I watch YouTube videos where singing teachers teach pronunciation and how to perform songs effectively.

Sugerencia: 回答中有较多停顿和重复，建议简洁表达观点，使用连词使句子更流畅。

Ejemplo: I want to sing for my future husband because my mom sang at her wedding to my dad. I think singing is a beautiful way to express love, and I have already chosen the song "I Love You."

Sugerencia: 回答中口头语较多，表达不够清晰，建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，避免重复。

Ejemplo: Definitely, singing can bring happiness because it allows people to express their feelings and joy. Many people find the lyrics meaningful, which makes singing very encouraging.

× when I was a kid I usually go to the karaoke with my parents

✓ when I was a kid I usually went to the karaoke with my parents

这里描述的是过去的习惯动作，应该使用过去时态，故将go改为went。

× and listening to music from YouTube and when I was primary 4.

✓ and listened to music from YouTube when I was in primary 4.

此处应使用过去时态的动词形式来描述过去的动作，且句子结构不完整，需调整为完整句子。

× No, I haven't learned how to sing professionally, but I do watch some videos from YouTube that some umm, sing.

✓ No, I haven't learned how to sing professionally, but I do watch some videos from YouTube where some umm, singers teach.

原句中'sing'用法不当，应使用名词'singers'或动词teach来表达意思。

× Teachers, they teach how to sing and how to uh pronounce umm or how to umm umm present the songs and.

✓ Teachers teach how to sing, how to pronounce, and how to present the songs.

重复使用主语代词'they'不必要，且句子结构不完整，需简化并补全。

× I want to sing for my future husband.

✓ I want to sing for my future husband.

此句无语法错误，无需修改。

× she think that it is a great way to express love and so do I

✓ she thinks that it is a great way to express love and so do I

主语是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加-s，故think改为thinks。

× and I have picked a song, uh, which is I love you.

✓ and I have picked a song, which is "I Love You."

歌曲名称应加引号，且句子结构需调整使表达更清晰。

× Definitely it is because I always think that it is a great way to express our feelings or even express joy.

✓ Definitely, it is because I always think that singing is a great way to express our feelings or even express joy.

句子缺少主语，需补充明确主语使句子完整。

× people always umm, tell uh people, uh, the lyrics as very meaningful.

✓ People always say that the lyrics are very meaningful.

原句中'tell people the lyrics as very meaningful'表达不当，应改为'say that the lyrics are very meaningful'。

× Therefore I think it is encouraging.

✓ Therefore, I think it is encouraging.

句首应加逗号以分隔句子，使表达更自然。