Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 你的回答有些重复且表达不够自然，建议避免重复表达同一观点，并且注意用词准确。可以用更自然的表达方式说明不喜欢唱歌的原因，并且举例时要用正确的词汇。

Ejemplo: No, I don't enjoy singing because I lack confidence in my singing skills. For instance, occasions like karaoke sessions make me nervous, so I usually avoid singing in public.

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，建议简洁明了地描述学习唱歌的经历，并避免矛盾的表达。

Ejemplo: Yes, I learned to sing in primary school when our teacher asked us to perform in front of the class. It was an awkward experience, and I didn't do very well.

Sugerencia: 回答较好，但可以使用更地道的表达方式，如“supportive of me”而非“supportive to me”，并且注意句子结构的完整性。

Ejemplo: If I had to choose, I would like to sing for my mom because she is always supportive of me and would never laugh at my singing. Moreover, singing for her is a great way to show my appreciation and gratitude.

Sugerencia: 回答表达了观点，但句子结构和用词可以更自然流畅。建议使用更准确的表达方式，并且避免重复。

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it allows people to share their feelings and encourage others. For example, many people feel inspired when they watch singers perform on TV.

× For example, the seeing occasions like KTV always makes me nervous and I always try to avoid seeing in these public occasions.

✓ For example, the singing occasions like KTV always make me nervous and I always try to avoid singing in these public occasions.

这里的动词应该用动名词形式作名词使用，'seeing' 应改为 'singing'，因为句意是指唱歌的场合，而不是看见。并且主语是复数 'occasions'，谓语动词应使用复数形式 'make'。

× Yes, but it was in my primary class and our teacher requested us to sing in front of classmates. It is. It was a really awkward occasion and I did really well. Really bad.

✓ Yes, but it was in my primary class and our teacher requested us to sing in front of classmates. It was a really awkward occasion and I did really badly.

句中 'It is.' 是多余且不合适的，应删除。'did really well' 与后文 'Really bad' 意义矛盾，应改为 'did really badly' 表示表现不好。'badly' 是副词，修饰动词 'did'。

× If I had to pick one, I would like to sing for my mom because she is always supportive to me and will never laugh at me.

✓ If I had to pick one, I would like to sing for my mom because she is always supportive of me and will never laugh at me.

形容词 'supportive' 后应接介词 'of'，表示对某人支持，'supportive to me' 是错误搭配。

× What's more, sing for her is a good way to express my appreciation and deep gratitude to her.

✓ What's more, singing for her is a good way to express my appreciation and deep gratitude to her.

动词 'sing' 在此处应使用动名词形式 'singing' 作主语。

× Yes, and I think it's a way to pass your thoughts and encouragement to others so others will be happy.

✓ Yes, and I think it's a way to pass your thoughts and encouragement on to others so others will be happy.

动词短语 'pass on' 表示传递，缺少介词 'on' 会导致表达不完整。

× For example, many, many people will be encouraged by the singers singing on the TV.

✓ For example, many, many people will be encouraged by the singers singing on TV.

'on the TV' 中的定冠词 'the' 不必要，通常说 'on TV' 表示在电视上。