Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is a bit repetitive and lacks clear structure. Try to give a direct answer first, then add specific reasons with linking words to make it more coherent. Avoid filler words like 'you know' and repetition of phrases.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy singing because it refreshes my mind and helps me relax. Moreover, I feel connected to the music, especially songs by singers like Arijit Singh, whose melodies are very close to my heart.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by using clearer sentence structure and linking words. Avoid repeating words and try to be more concise and natural in your response.

Ejemplo: No, I have never taken formal singing lessons. I usually learn songs by listening to them on TV or radio and practicing on my own. Although there are institutes for singing, I have never attended any.

Sugerencia: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas clearly with proper linking words and avoid filler phrases. Use correct grammar to express your thoughts effectively.

Ejemplo: I would like to sing for my wife because she enjoys listening to music, especially romantic songs. Singing for her would be a way to express my feelings and connect with her emotionally.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to give a clear topic sentence, then explain with specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect word usage.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because the lyrics often reflect our daily lives. For example, singers like Javed Ali create songs that many people can relate to, which makes the music meaningful and enjoyable.

× Yes, of course, singing can bring happiness to people because the lyrics that written by the creator, it's actually it's actually the reflection of our daily life.

✓ Yes, of course, singing can bring happiness to people because the lyrics that are written by the creator, it's actually the reflection of our daily life.

The phrase 'lyrics that written by the creator' is missing the auxiliary verb 'are' to form the correct passive voice in the present perfect tense. The correct form is 'lyrics that are written by the creator'. This is necessary to indicate that the lyrics have been written by someone, using the past participle 'written' with the auxiliary verb 'are'. In English grammar, when using the past participle to form passive voice, the auxiliary verb 'be' (in the correct tense) must be included.

× And, you know, to the music you can connect yourself, such as singers like Arijit Shaan.

✓ And, you know, with music you can connect yourself, such as singers like Arijit Shaan.

The phrase 'to the music' is incorrect because we usually say 'connect with music' rather than 'connect to the music'. Also, 'the music' is too specific here; 'music' without 'the' is more natural. This is a preposition usage issue but also relates to article usage and plural/singular context. The correction improves naturalness and grammatical correctness.

× And, you know, to the music you can connect yourself, such as singers like Arijit Shaan.

✓ And, you know, with music you can connect yourself, such as singers like Arijit Shaan.

The preposition 'to' is incorrectly used with 'music' here. The correct preposition is 'with' when talking about connecting with something. So, 'connect with music' is the correct phrase. Using the wrong preposition changes the meaning and makes the sentence ungrammatical.

× They're they're so close to us.

✓ They are so close to us.

The repetition 'They're they're' is a mistake. It should be 'They are' or the contraction 'They're' once. This is an error in pronoun usage and sentence structure. Removing the duplicate improves clarity and correctness.

× No, actually I don't.

✓ No, actually I haven't.

The question is 'Have you ever learnt how to sing?' which requires a present perfect tense answer. Saying 'I don't' is incorrect here because it uses the simple present tense. The correct response is 'I haven't' (short for 'I have not') to indicate that the action has never happened. This is a modal verb and tense usage issue.

× But yeah, there are also some institute, but I never went there actually.

✓ But yeah, there are also some institutes, but I never went there actually.

The word 'institute' is singular, but 'some' requires a plural noun. Therefore, 'institute' should be pluralized to 'institutes'. This is a singular and plural issue related to quantifiers.

× Ah, there's no one special, but I would love to sing for my wife because she's she loves to listen music.

✓ Ah, there's no one special, but I would love to sing for my wife because she loves to listen to music.

The phrase 'she's she loves' is redundant and incorrect. It should be 'she loves'. Also, 'listen music' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'listen to music'. This is an error in pronoun usage and preposition usage.

× Usually she likes to listen romantic songs like, you know, it can connect, she can connect with them very good.

✓ Usually she likes to listen to romantic songs because, you know, she can connect with them very well.

The phrase 'listen romantic songs' is missing the preposition 'to'. Also, 'it can connect' is unclear and should be 'she can connect'. 'Very good' should be 'very well' as it modifies the verb 'connect'. These are errors in preposition usage, pronoun usage, and adjective/adverb usage.

× So that's how people can connect with music such as writer like Javed Ali.

✓ So that's how people can connect with music such as writers like Javed Ali.

The word 'writer' should be plural 'writers' to match 'such as' which introduces examples of multiple people. This is a singular and plural issue and pronoun usage issue.

× They are, they are great because of their formalities.

✓ They are great because of their formality.

The word 'formalities' is incorrect in this context. The correct word is 'formality' which means the quality of being formal. 'Formalities' usually refers to official procedures or ceremonies, which does not fit here. This is an adjective/adverb usage issue.