Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct sentence structures and avoid redundancy. For example, say "I'm not fond of singing because I don't have a good voice, and I feel shy when standing on stage." Also, keep your answer concise and clear.

Ejemplo: I'm not fond of singing because I don't have a good singing voice, and I often feel shy and embarrassed when standing on stage.

Sugerencia: Your answer lacks clarity and contains awkward expressions. Use clearer and more natural phrases, such as "I took singing lessons as a child, but I didn't enjoy it and realized it wasn't my interest, so I stopped." Also, avoid unnecessary words and improve sentence flow.

Ejemplo: I took singing lessons when I was a child, but I didn't enjoy it and realized it wasn't my interest, so I stopped.

Sugerencia: Your answer is good but can be improved by using more precise vocabulary and smoother linking words. For example, say "I would choose to sing for my family because they are my closest friends and always encourage me when I perform." Also, avoid repetition and improve sentence structure.

Ejemplo: If I had the chance to sing for someone, I would definitely choose my family because they are my closest friends and always encourage me when I perform.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to say, "I think singing can bring happiness depending on the type of song. For example, singing a happy song can influence people around me and make them feel joyful." Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: I believe singing can bring happiness depending on the song. For instance, if I sing a happy song, it can influence people around me and make them feel joyful.

× I particularly not fond of seeing because I don't have a good singing voice and I also tend to be shy and embarrassed during the during standing on the stage and I would be hesitated.

✓ I am particularly not fond of singing because I don't have a good singing voice and I also tend to be shy and embarrassed when standing on the stage and I would hesitate.

The phrase 'fond of seeing' is incorrect; it should be 'fond of singing' as the topic is about singing. The phrase 'during the during standing on the stage' is redundant and incorrect; it should be 'when standing on the stage' to indicate the time. Also, 'would be hesitated' is incorrect; the correct form is 'would hesitate' because 'hesitate' is a verb and does not take 'be' in this context.

× Well, I studied singing when I was a child, but it turned out to be a very bad result and I found that it's not my interest. So I immediately just removed this my this interest.

✓ Well, I studied singing when I was a child, but it turned out to be a very bad result and I found that it was not my interest. So I immediately just gave up this interest.

The phrase 'it's not my interest' should be in past tense 'it was not my interest' to match the past context. The phrase 'removed this my this interest' is awkward and incorrect; the correct expression is 'gave up this interest' to indicate stopping an activity or interest.

× Well, if I have a chance to sing for someone, I definitely would choose to sing to my family because they are my closing friends and I think they will give me the best wish.

✓ Well, if I have a chance to sing for someone, I would definitely choose to sing to my family because they are my closest friends and I think they will give me their best wishes.

The word 'closing' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'closest' to describe close relationships. Also, 'best wish' should be plural 'best wishes' and 'give me the best wish' should be 'give me their best wishes' to correctly use pronouns and plural form.

× If I stand on stage, they will encourage me and they will cheer for me.

✓ If I stand on the stage, they will encourage me and they will cheer for me.

The phrase 'stand on stage' is acceptable in informal speech, but the more correct form is 'stand on the stage' with the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific stage.

× Well, I think it depends on the songs, whether the song it's a happy song or it's a sad sadly song.

✓ Well, I think it depends on the songs, whether the song is a happy song or a sad song.

The phrase 'it's a sad sadly song' is incorrect; 'sadly' is an adverb and cannot modify 'song' which is a noun. The correct adjective 'sad' should be used to describe the song.

× So for example, if I sing a happy song, then the people near to me, they were influenced by my happy song and then they would be turned to be happy.

✓ So for example, if I sing a happy song, then the people near me are influenced by my happy song and then they become happy.

The phrase 'they were influenced' is past tense but the sentence is conditional and present tense is more appropriate here. Also, 'would be turned to be happy' is awkward; 'they become happy' is clearer and grammatically correct. The preposition 'near to me' should be 'near me'.