Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer shows enthusiasm, which is great, but it lacks clarity and has grammatical errors. Try to give a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, followed by a supporting detail using linking words. Avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it is my favourite hobby. For example, when I go out with my friends, we often sing songs together to have fun and relax.

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific supporting details using linking words to improve coherence. Try to use more precise vocabulary and avoid filler words.

Ejemplo: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was in senior high school. At that time, my teacher gave us singing lessons to help us improve our vocal skills and perform better than others.

Sugerencia: Your answer expresses a good idea but is repetitive and has grammatical errors. Use a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons or examples. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and avoid redundancy.

Ejemplo: If I had the chance to sing for someone, I would choose my parents because they have worked very hard for me. I would like to dedicate a special song to show my gratitude and love for them.

Sugerencia: Your answer has good ideas but is unclear and contains many filler words. Try to give a direct answer first, then explain with specific reasons using linking words. Use clearer vocabulary and avoid repetition to make your answer more effective.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. When someone sings for others, it creates a comfortable and confident atmosphere because singing expresses emotions and love, which makes people feel special.

× Me and my friend when we went out together we like I love to sing a song.

✓ My friend and I, when we went out together, like to sing songs.

The pronoun 'Me' is incorrectly used as the subject; it should be 'My friend and I'. Also, the sentence structure is awkward and needs rephrasing for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yeah, I really remember time lying when I was in a senior country school.

✓ Yeah, I really remember the time when I was in a senior country school.

The phrase 'time lying' is incorrect; it should be 'the time'. The sentence also needs 'the' before 'time' to specify the particular time being remembered.

× So at that time my teacher told like we having a class of singing at that time, they taught us like how we can sing better than others.

✓ So at that time, my teacher told us that we were having a singing class, and they taught us how we could sing better than others.

The sentence has incorrect pronoun usage and verb forms. 'Told like we having' is incorrect; it should be 'told us that we were having'. Also, 'like how we can sing' should be 'how we could sing' to match past tense.

× Well, if I get a chance in my life to sing for somebody, I definitely wanted to sing for my parents as they did too much effort for us.

✓ Well, if I get a chance in my life to sing for somebody, I would definitely want to sing for my parents as they have put in a lot of effort for us.

The modal verb 'wanted' is incorrectly used in a conditional sentence referring to a future possibility; it should be 'would want'. Also, 'did too much effort' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'have put in a lot of effort'.

× So I definitely wanted to make like wanted to make one song for my parents.

✓ So I definitely want to make a song for my parents.

The sentence is repetitive and uses past tense 'wanted' inconsistently. It should be simplified to present tense 'want' to match the conditional context.

× Of course, like whenever some persons like sing a song for the another, they feel comfortable as well as they feel quite confident because at that time like it's a, it's a different feeling like someone singing for us, we can he can show their expression and the love throughout that person.

✓ Of course, whenever someone sings a song for another person, they feel comfortable and quite confident because it is a different feeling when someone sings for us; they can show their expression and love through that song.

The sentence has incorrect pronouns ('some persons like sing', 'the another', 'we can he can show their'). It also has awkward phrasing and redundancy. Correct pronouns and clearer sentence structure improve clarity and grammatical correctness.