Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn có vẻ không tự nhiên và có lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ như cụm từ "I envy myself" không phù hợp trong ngữ cảnh này. Bạn nên sử dụng các cụm từ tự nhiên hơn để diễn đạt cảm xúc khi hát, đồng thời tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và diễn đạt rõ ràng hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, definitely. I enjoy singing, especially in front of my family and friends because it makes me feel confident and allows me to express my true personality.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu không rõ ràng, làm cho ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, đúng ngữ pháp và sắp xếp ý rõ ràng hơn để trả lời câu hỏi.

Ejemplo: No, I have never had the chance to learn singing properly. I once attended a singing class for one day when I was a child, but after that, I mostly practiced by singing karaoke at home.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời thiếu sự mạch lạc và có lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ như "I feel that I am more confident and realized" không chính xác. Bạn nên sử dụng các liên từ để kết nối ý và diễn đạt rõ ràng hơn về lý do bạn muốn hát cho những người đó.

Ejemplo: I would love to sing for my mom because she has a beautiful voice. Also, I enjoy singing with my best friend because it makes me feel more confident and relaxed.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời khá tốt nhưng có thể cải thiện bằng cách sử dụng từ vựng phong phú hơn và câu văn mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ và sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, definitely. Singing can strengthen relationships and bring people closer. For example, whenever my family goes to karaoke, we share the same interests and enjoy each other's company, which makes us feel happy and relaxed.

× I enjoy singing, especially in front of my family and friends because at that time I feel that I envy myself and I can express my true personality with them.

✓ I enjoy singing, especially in front of my family and friends because at that time I feel that I express myself and I can show my true personality to them.

The phrase 'I envy myself' is incorrect in this context; 'envy' means to desire something someone else has, which does not fit here. The correct expression is 'express myself' to indicate showing one's feelings or personality. Also, 'express my true personality with them' should be 'express my true personality to them' to use the correct preposition.

× I haven't had any opportunity to learn to sing what I was a little girl.

✓ I haven't had any opportunity to learn to sing since I was a little girl.

The phrase 'what I was a little girl' is incorrect. The correct conjunction is 'since' to indicate the time from the past until now. Also, 'what' is not appropriate here.

× I still have the time to went into the same class but I just studied for only one day and after that I just practice my voice through singing at karaoke.

✓ I still had the chance to join the same class but I only studied for one day and after that I just practiced my voice by singing at karaoke.

The phrase 'have the time to went' is incorrect; 'went' is past tense and should be 'go' or 'join' in base form after 'to'. Also, 'practice' should be in past tense 'practiced' to match the past context. 'Through singing at karaoke' is better expressed as 'by singing at karaoke'.

× Absolutely my mom because she has a beautiful voice and the second person I would probably think in my mind is my best friend.

✓ Absolutely my mom because she has a beautiful voice and the second person I would probably think of is my best friend.

The phrase 'think in my mind' is redundant and incorrect; the correct preposition after 'think' in this context is 'of'. So, 'think of my best friend' is correct.

× I feel that I am more confident and realized if I sing with them.

✓ I feel that I am more confident and realize it when I sing with them.

The verb tense is inconsistent; 'realized' is past tense but should be present tense 'realize' to match 'I feel'. Also, 'if I sing' is better as 'when I sing' to indicate habitual action.

× I still remember every time my family goes to the karaoke, we have the same interest and staying with each other, which makes us very happy and relaxed.

✓ I still remember every time my family goes to karaoke, we share the same interests and stay with each other, which makes us very happy and relaxed.

The phrase 'goes to the karaoke' is incorrect; 'karaoke' as an activity does not need 'the'. Also, 'have the same interest' should be 'share the same interests' for natural expression. 'Staying with each other' should be 'stay with each other' to maintain parallel verb forms.