Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to make your answer more structured and clear. Start with a direct response, then explain with specific reasons using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases.

Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relieve stress. When I sing, I feel like I can express my emotions fully since every song tells a story. This makes me feel happy or helps me cope when I'm feeling down.

Sugerencia: Focus on giving a clear and concise answer. Use correct grammar and avoid fragmented sentences. Explain your reasons logically with linking words to improve coherence.

Ejemplo: No, I haven't learnt how to sing yet, but I would like to. I believe that learning to sing properly, like my favourite artists, would help me enjoy music even more.

Sugerencia: Make sure your answer is clear and directly answers the question. Use complete sentences and explain your ideas with specific details and linking words to improve clarity.

Ejemplo: I want to sing for everyone, especially my fans online. Currently, I share my music on the internet, and I hope my songs can make them feel happy or comforted when they are disappointed.

Sugerencia: Try to express your ideas clearly and avoid incomplete sentences. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your opinion, using linking words for coherence.

Ejemplo: I strongly believe singing can bring happiness. When I was a child, I faced many challenges, but singing helped me a lot. Therefore, I think music supports people emotionally and makes them feel better.

× Yes, I love singing so much because the music release my stress so much and when I singing I feel like I can say everything because every songs have each stories so that makes me so happy or disperse me when when I'm disappointed.

✓ Yes, I love singing so much because the music releases my stress so much and when I am singing I feel like I can say everything because every song has its own story so that makes me so happy or disperses me when I'm disappointed.

The verb 'release' should be in third person singular form 'releases' to agree with the singular subject 'music' (Grammar problem type ID: 2). 'When I singing' is incorrect; it should be 'when I am singing' to use the correct present continuous tense (Grammar problem type ID: 8). 'Every songs have each stories' is incorrect; 'songs' should be singular 'song' and 'have' should be 'has' to agree with singular subject, and 'each stories' should be 'its own story' for correct singular possessive (Grammar problem type ID: 1 and 27). 'Disperse me' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'disperses me' to agree with singular subject 'that' (Grammar problem type ID: 2).

× Actually not yet, but I really want to learn how to sing it, because in my opinion if I learn how to sing and I can see. Hot the way I really want to like. Like my favorite artist, I think I can enjoy music more and more.

✓ Actually, not yet, but I really want to learn how to sing because, in my opinion, if I learn how to sing and I can see how the way I really want to sing, like my favorite artist, I think I can enjoy music more and more.

The phrase 'learn how to sing it' is incorrect; 'sing it' is unnecessary and should be removed for clarity (Grammar problem type ID: 26). 'Hot the way' seems to be a typo or mishearing; it should be 'how the way' to make sense (Grammar problem type ID: 26). The sentence structure is fragmented and needs correction for clarity and flow (Grammar problem type ID: 26).

× I want to Singapore. Everyone because. Actually I am. Doing. Kind of artist thing currently in the Internet, so I have some fans of my songs and I really wanted to them and if they are disappointed or fills them.

✓ I want to sing for everyone in Singapore because actually I am doing some kind of artist thing currently on the Internet, so I have some fans of my songs and I really want to support them if they are disappointed or feel down.

The original sentences are fragmented and lack proper structure, making them unclear (Grammar problem type ID: 26). 'I want to Singapore' should be 'I want to sing for everyone in Singapore' to make sense (Grammar problem type ID: 26). 'Doing kind of artist thing' should be 'doing some kind of artist thing' (Grammar problem type ID: 14). 'On the Internet' is the correct preposition (Grammar problem type ID: 11). 'I really wanted to them' is incomplete; it should be 'I really want to support them' (Grammar problem type ID: 26). 'If they are disappointed or fills them' is incorrect; 'fills' should be 'feel down' or similar (Grammar problem type ID: 26).

× I really believe so, because. I when I was child. I was. I have the. I mean I have the. Tom, right. Hold on so much, but singing is very important to me, so I believe singing and music is supporting people.

✓ I really believe so because when I was a child, I had a tough time, but singing was very important to me, so I believe singing and music support people.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear (Grammar problem type ID: 26). 'When I was child' should be 'when I was a child' (Grammar problem type ID: 22). 'I have the. I mean I have the. Tom, right. Hold on so much' is unclear and seems to be a mishearing or error; it is corrected to 'I had a tough time' for clarity (Grammar problem type ID: 26). 'Singing is very important' is correct but to maintain past tense consistency, 'singing was very important' is better (Grammar problem type ID: 5). 'Singing and music is supporting people' should be 'singing and music support people' for subject-verb agreement and correct tense (Grammar problem type ID: 27 and 6).