Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: คำตอบของคุณควรชัดเจนและเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น โดยหลีกเลี่ยงการพูดซ้ำและคำที่ไม่สมบูรณ์ เช่น "it is one of the two" ที่ไม่ชัดเจน และควรใช้ linking words เพื่อเชื่อมประโยคให้ลื่นไหล เช่น 'because', 'so' และควรเพิ่มรายละเอียดที่เฉพาะเจาะจงมากขึ้นเกี่ยวกับการร้องเพลง เช่น คุณชอบร้องเพลงแนวไหนหรือร้องเพลงเมื่อไหร่

Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me express my emotions and relax. For example, when I sing my favorite songs during free time, I feel refreshed and less stressed.

Sugerencia: คำตอบของคุณตรงประเด็นดีแล้ว แต่ควรเพิ่มรายละเอียดเพื่อทำให้คำตอบสมบูรณ์และน่าสนใจมากขึ้น เช่น อธิบายว่าทำไมคุณถึงอยากเรียนร้องเพลง และคุณคิดว่าการเรียนร้องเพลงจะช่วยอะไรคุณได้บ้าง

Ejemplo: No, I haven't had the chance to learn singing yet, but I hope to take lessons in the future because I want to improve my voice and gain more confidence.

Sugerencia: คำตอบของคุณควรใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ชัดเจนและหลีกเลี่ยงการพูดติดขัด เช่น 'I'm not that confident and it's kind of embarrassing'. นอกจากนี้ควรเพิ่มรายละเอียดเพื่ออธิบายความรู้สึกของคุณเกี่ยวกับการร้องเพลงต่อหน้าคนอื่น

Ejemplo: I prefer to sing for myself because I am not very confident and feel embarrassed to sing in front of others. However, I hope to overcome this fear someday.

Sugerencia: คำตอบของคุณควรมีความลื่นไหลและหลีกเลี่ยงการพูดซ้ำ เช่น 'in front of in front of' และ 'I feel like' หลายครั้ง ควรใช้ linking words เพื่อเชื่อมประโยค และเพิ่มรายละเอียดที่ชัดเจนเกี่ยวกับเหตุผลที่ทำให้การร้องเพลงทำให้คนมีความสุข

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. For instance, when K-pop idols perform on stage, their energy and talent excite the audience, making them feel joyful and entertained.

× Yeah, I really love to sing because it is one of the two that I can express myself and also it really refresh me and.

✓ Yeah, I really love to sing because it is one of the two ways that I can express myself and also it really refreshes me.

The verb 'refresh' needs to be in the third person singular form 'refreshes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'one of the two' is incomplete; it should be 'one of the two ways' to make sense.

× Yeah, I really love to sing because it is one of the two that I can express myself and also it really refresh me and.

✓ Yeah, I really love to sing because it is one of the two ways that I can express myself and also it really refreshes me.

The verb 'refresh' must be conjugated as 'refreshes' to agree with the singular subject 'it' in the present tense.

× Yeah, I really love to sing because it is one of the two that I can express myself and also it really refresh me and.

✓ Yeah, I really love to sing because it is one of the two ways that I can express myself and also it really refreshes me.

The sentence is incomplete and awkward; adding 'ways' clarifies the meaning and improves sentence structure.

× When I'm singing, I can escape from daily stressors as well, so yeah, I like to sing during my free time.

✓ When I'm singing, I can escape from daily stressors as well, so yeah, I like singing during my free time.

After 'like', the gerund form 'singing' is more natural than the infinitive 'to sing' when talking about general preferences.

× No, unfortunately I don't have any opportunities to go learn singing, but I wish I could in the future.

✓ No, unfortunately I haven't had any opportunities to learn singing, but I wish I could in the future.

The present perfect 'haven't had' is appropriate to express lack of opportunities up to now. Also, 'go learn singing' is awkward; 'learn singing' is sufficient.

× I actually want to sing for myself because I'm not that confident an it's so it's kind of embarrassing to sing in front of people.

✓ I actually want to sing for myself because I'm not that confident and it's kind of embarrassing to sing in front of people.

The phrase 'an it's so it's' is incorrect and redundant; it should be 'and it's' to connect the ideas properly.

× Yes I agree with that. For example, whenever kpop idols sing and dance in front of in front of an audience. I feel like many people become very excited and. They feel like. Yeah, I feel like the majority of people will become happy.

✓ Yes, I agree with that. For example, whenever K-pop idols sing and dance in front of an audience, I feel like many people become very excited and happy. Yeah, I feel like the majority of people become happy.

The original sentences are fragmented and repetitive. Combining ideas into complete sentences improves clarity and flow.