Chocolate— Part 1 Informe
Conversación
Part 1
Examinador
Do you like eating chocolate? Why or why not?
Candidato
I don't like eating chocolate, umm, because chocolate are too sweet for me. That makes me have a toothache.
Examinador
How often do you eat chocolate?
Candidato
I almost never eat chocolate. Umm, except when some friend sent me some chocolate. Well, maybe I'll have a try.
Examinador
Did you often eat chocolate when you were a kid?
Candidato
I'm actually I don't eat chocolate when I was a kid. I don't like eating something sweet since I was young. So basically I really don't eat chocolate.
Examinador
Why do you think chocolate is popular around the world?
Candidato
Well, I think just lots of people like eating something sweet and chocolate make them feel. Relaxed, uh, because sweet food usually bring us some good feelings.
Examinador
What's your favourite flavour of chocolate?
Candidato
I don't like chocolate, so whatever. I don't like any flavor of chocolate.
Examinador
Do you think it is good to use chocolate as gifts to others?
Candidato
Yes, I do think it's good to use chocolates as gifts to others because there are lots of people like chocolate, so chocolate is really a nice gift.
Evaluación
Total
Part 1
Do you like eating chocolate? Why or why not?
Puntuación: 70.0Sugerencia: 回答时要注意语法正确，例如'chocolate are'应为'chocolate is'。回答可以更自然流畅，避免使用'umm'等口头语。可以增加具体细节说明为什么甜味让你不喜欢巧克力。
Ejemplo: I don't like eating chocolate because it is too sweet for me, which often causes toothaches. Therefore, I usually avoid it.
How often do you eat chocolate?
Puntuación: 75.0Sugerencia: 回答时应避免使用'umm'和'well'等口头语，使表达更自然。可以用连接词使句子更连贯，例如'However'。
Ejemplo: I almost never eat chocolate. However, if a friend gives me some, I might try it.
Did you often eat chocolate when you were a kid?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: 时态使用不准确，应该用过去时描述过去的习惯。句子结构需要更清晰，避免重复。
Ejemplo: Actually, I didn't eat chocolate when I was a kid because I have never liked sweet foods since I was young.
Why do you think chocolate is popular around the world?
Puntuación: 70.0Sugerencia: 回答中语法错误较多，如'chocolate make'应为'chocolate makes'。避免使用'well'和'uh'等口头语。可以用连接词使句子更连贯。
Ejemplo: I think chocolate is popular worldwide because many people enjoy sweet foods, and chocolate often makes them feel relaxed and happy.
What's your favourite flavour of chocolate?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: 回答过于简短且不够礼貌。可以更自然地表达不喜欢巧克力的原因，并用完整句子回答。
Ejemplo: I don't have a favorite chocolate flavor because I generally don't like chocolate.
Do you think it is good to use chocolate as gifts to others?
Puntuación: 80.0Sugerencia: 回答较好，但可以使用更丰富的词汇和连接词使表达更流畅。
Ejemplo: Yes, I think chocolate makes a great gift because many people enjoy it, and it is a sweet treat that can bring happiness.
Gramática
× I don't like eating chocolate, umm, because chocolate are too sweet for me.
✓ I don't like eating chocolate, umm, because chocolate is too sweet for me.
这里的'chocolate'是不可数名词，应该用单数形式的动词'is'，而不是复数形式'are'。
× except when some friend sent me some chocolate.
✓ except when some friends sent me some chocolate.
'some friend'应为复数形式'some friends'，表示不特定的几个朋友。
× I'm actually I don't eat chocolate when I was a kid.
✓ Actually, I didn't eat chocolate when I was a kid.
句子时态不一致，描述过去的习惯应使用过去时'didn't eat'，而不是现在时'don't eat'。
× chocolate make them feel. Relaxed, uh, because sweet food usually bring us some good feelings.
✓ chocolate makes them feel relaxed, uh, because sweet food usually brings us some good feelings.
主语'chocolate'为单数，谓语动词应加-s，变为'makes'和'brings'。
× there are lots of people like chocolate, so chocolate is really a nice gift.
✓ there are lots of people who like chocolate, so chocolate is really a nice gift.
缺少关系代词'who'，使句子结构完整。
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