Chocolate— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm' to make your answer sound more natural and fluent. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and avoid repetition, for example, instead of repeating 'because', use 'as' or 'since'. Keep your answer concise and clear.

Ejemplo: Yes, I absolutely love eating chocolate as it is creamy and delicious. It improves my mood significantly. For instance, I usually eat it during my periods and exams because it helps boost my concentration and overall well-being.

Sugerencia: Avoid repeating the same information and filler words. Structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details using linking words like 'however' or 'nowadays'. This will make your response more coherent and effective.

Ejemplo: I used to eat a lot of chocolate when I was a child; however, nowadays I limit my intake because I am concerned about my dental health. I mainly eat chocolate during exams and my periods.

Sugerencia: Try to reduce filler words and use more precise vocabulary. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' appropriately to connect your ideas. Also, avoid repeating phrases like 'used to' excessively.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often ate chocolate as a child because I loved sweet treats. My dad used to bring delicious chocolates from Canada once a year, which made them very special to me and always lifted my mood.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and off-topic. Focus on the question by explaining reasons why chocolate is popular globally. Use clear sentences with appropriate linking words and avoid unrelated examples. Keep your answer relevant and concise.

Ejemplo: Chocolate is popular worldwide because it has a rich, sweet taste that appeals to many people. Additionally, different countries produce unique varieties, which adds to its global appeal.

Sugerencia: Avoid using informal or negative words like 'disgusting' in formal speaking tests. Instead, express your preferences politely. Also, use linking words like 'however' to contrast your opinion with others'. Keep your answer clear and natural.

Ejemplo: I prefer white milk chocolate because I enjoy sweet flavors. However, I am aware that dark chocolate is considered healthy by many people, so I might try it in the future.

Sugerencia: Try to avoid repeating 'personally' and filler words. Use linking words like 'because' and 'although' to make your answer more coherent. Also, be careful with absolute statements; instead, use softer expressions.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe giving chocolates as gifts is a good idea because many people enjoy receiving them. Although some may avoid eating chocolate due to health reasons, they usually appreciate the gesture.

× Yes, I absolutely love uh eating chocolate cause umm, because it's creamy and delicious.

✓ Yes, I absolutely love eating chocolate because it's creamy and delicious.

The use of 'uh' and 'umm' are fillers and unnecessary in formal speech. Also, 'cause' should be replaced with 'because' for clarity and correctness.

× It makes my mood feel really better.

✓ It makes my mood feel much better.

The phrase 'really better' is incorrect; 'much better' is the correct collocation to express improvement.

× I usually eat it during my periods and my exams 'cause it's it Boots boosts my exam uh, score and my mind as well, so it's pretty delicious and tasty.

✓ I usually eat it during my periods and my exams because it boosts my exam score and my mind as well, so it's pretty delicious and tasty.

The sentence has repetition ('it's it Boots') and filler words ('uh'). 'Cause' should be replaced with 'because' for formality. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× When I was a little kid I used to eat a lot of chocolate but now I have deducted it deducted the time I usually eat chocolate cause umm I think my teeth will get ruined if I eat it every single day.

✓ When I was a little kid, I used to eat a lot of chocolate but now I have reduced the time I usually eat chocolate because I think my teeth will get ruined if I eat it every single day.

The phrase 'have deducted it deducted the time' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'have reduced the time'. Also, 'cause' should be 'because' for formality.

× Now I kinda eat it on in my exams and in my periods.

✓ Now I kind of eat it during my exams and my periods.

The preposition 'on in' is incorrect. The correct preposition to indicate time periods is 'during'. Also, 'kinda' should be 'kind of' for clarity.

× My dad usually brings, uh, used to bring it from Canada and they were really delicious and I used to get it in once a year, so it was really precious to me.

✓ My dad usually used to bring it from Canada and it was really delicious. I used to get it once a year, so it was really precious to me.

The sentence has mixed tenses and unnecessary fillers. 'Usually brings, used to bring' is contradictory; 'usually used to bring' is correct. 'They were' should be 'it was' referring to chocolate. 'In once a year' is incorrect; 'once a year' is correct.

× Every country has its own speciality, so, so many different countries, umm say that this chocolate is made by us so umm, it kinda makes their own specialty like Dubai, uh, in Dubai, uh, Kunafa Chowk was became very viable around the world.

✓ Every country has its own speciality, so many different countries say that this chocolate is made by us, so it kind of makes their own specialty. For example, in Dubai, Kunafa Chowk has become very popular around the world.

The sentence has redundancy ('so, so many'), filler words, and incorrect verb form ('was became'). 'Viable' is incorrect in this context; 'popular' is appropriate. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× All the people wanted to try and it's so sweet and tasty.

✓ Everyone wanted to try it because it's so sweet and tasty.

'All the people' is better expressed as 'everyone'. The sentence is incomplete without 'it' after 'try'. Adding 'because' clarifies the reason.

× I kind of really like a sweet thing, so I prefer a white milk chocolate and I don't really like other types of chocolate like umm, dark chocolate because it's really disgusting to me.

✓ I really like sweet things, so I prefer white milk chocolate and I don't really like other types of chocolate like dark chocolate because I find it really disgusting.

'A sweet thing' is incorrect; 'sweet things' is correct. 'A white milk chocolate' should be 'white milk chocolate' without 'a'. The sentence is rephrased for clarity and correctness.

× So I personally might be eating it sooner.

✓ So I might eat it in the future.

The phrase 'might be eating it sooner' is awkward. 'Might eat it in the future' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× Yes, I personally really believe that we should give chocolates to other 'cause I personally like receiving the chocolates from other people and a lot of people really get happy when they see chocolates 'cause it's sweet.

✓ Yes, I personally really believe that we should give chocolates to others because I personally like receiving chocolates from other people and a lot of people really get happy when they see chocolates because they are sweet.

'Other' should be 'others' to refer to other people. 'It's sweet' is incorrect when referring to chocolates (plural); 'they are sweet' is correct.

× And there's no such people who don't like chocolate.

✓ And there are no people who don't like chocolate.

'There's' is singular and incorrect here; 'there are' is correct for plural 'people'. 'No such people' is awkward; 'no people' is clearer.

× They might not eat from for some health concerns, but they really like it inside.

✓ They might not eat it due to some health concerns, but they really like it inside.

'Eat from for' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'eat it due to'. 'Like it inside' is unclear but kept as is assuming intended meaning.