Chocolate— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is enthusiastic but a bit repetitive and lacks clear structure. Try to make your response more concise and organized by stating your main reason first, then adding one or two supporting details with linking words.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like eating chocolate because it gives me a quick energy boost. Moreover, its creamy taste is very enjoyable and makes me feel happy.

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains some grammatical errors. Try to answer directly and clearly, using linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: I eat chocolate quite often, especially during big family meals. Since the food is usually rich and salty, I often crave something sweet like milky chocolate to balance the flavors.

Sugerencia: Your answer is interesting but incomplete and a bit confusing. Try to keep your answer focused and complete your ideas clearly, using linking words to connect your points.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often ate chocolate as a kid because it always made me happy. I remember once a friend played a prank by giving me chocolate made of mud, and I accidentally ate it, which was quite funny.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and lacks specific supporting details. Try to explain your ideas more clearly and provide specific reasons with examples, using linking words to organize your answer.

Ejemplo: Chocolate is popular worldwide because it is associated with happiness and sharing. For example, in my country, people often give chocolate as gifts during celebrations to express good wishes.

Sugerencia: Your answer is repetitive and contains unclear phrases. Try to express your favourite flavour clearly and explain why you like it, using linking words to connect your ideas.

Ejemplo: My favourite chocolate flavour is a combination of milky and hazelnut. I especially crave it when I feel stressed, and my husband often buys it for me to cheer me up.

Sugerencia: Your answer has good ideas but is unclear and repetitive. Try to express your opinion clearly and support it with specific reasons, using linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think chocolate is a good gift because it shows respect and affection. Moreover, giving chocolate can strengthen relationships and create a warm atmosphere when guests visit.

× the taste of chocolate is always like creamy and it just slips on my tongue I feel like

✓ the taste of chocolate is always creamy and it just slips on my tongue, I feel

The word 'like' is incorrectly used before the adjective 'creamy' and at the end of the sentence. 'Like' should be omitted to correctly describe the taste as 'creamy'. Also, a comma is needed before 'I feel' to separate the clauses.

× it also boost my energy and lift me up

✓ it also boosts my energy and lifts me up

The verbs 'boost' and 'lift' need to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Therefore, they should be in third person singular form 'boosts' and 'lifts'.

× I eat chocolate quite often, especially when I eat a huge feast with my family over.

✓ I eat chocolate quite often, especially when I have a huge feast with my family over.

The verb 'eat' is incorrectly used with 'a huge feast'. The correct verb is 'have' when referring to a feast or meal. Also, 'over' is better placed after 'family' to indicate visiting.

× Definitely I always craving. I'm always craving for something sweet to eat

✓ Definitely, I am always craving. I'm always craving something sweet to eat

The verb 'craving' requires the auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense. Also, 'craving for' is incorrect; the correct form is 'craving' without 'for'.

× I used to eat chocolates very often because chocolate made my day all the time

✓ I used to eat chocolate very often because chocolate made my day all the time

The word 'chocolates' is plural, but here 'chocolate' as a substance is more appropriate and commonly used in singular form.

× She gave me a chocolate but made of mud and I ate it too. It is because of.

✓ She gave me a chocolate made of mud, and I ate it too. It was because of that.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. Combining the clauses and completing the last sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× when you gift come to you you, you definitely serve them as a tree.

✓ when guests come to you, you definitely serve them as a treat.

The phrase 'gift come to you you' is incorrect and confusing. It should be 'guests come to you'. Also, 'serve them as a tree' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'serve them as a treat'.

× I am a huge fan of a Milky, an hazelnut, chocolate or maybe combination of them

✓ I am a huge fan of Milky and hazelnut chocolate or maybe a combination of them

The articles 'a' and 'an' are incorrectly used before uncountable or compound nouns. 'Milky' and 'hazelnut' are adjectives describing 'chocolate', so no article is needed before them. 'A combination' requires the article 'a'.

× I definitely I'm definitely craving something sweet all the time and my husband get it for me.

✓ I am definitely craving something sweet all the time and my husband gets it for me.

The auxiliary verb 'am' is needed for present continuous tense. Also, 'get' should be 'gets' to agree with singular subject 'my husband'.

× I'm in the combination of chocolate and Milky and Hazel and combination.

✓ I like the combination of chocolate, Milky, and hazelnut.

The phrase is unclear and incorrectly structured. 'I'm in the combination' is incorrect; it should be 'I like the combination'. Also, 'Hazel' should be 'hazelnut'.

× I think we may use chocolates as treats all the time because it's a kind of like a showing respect and loving each other.

✓ I think we may use chocolates as treats all the time because it's a way of showing respect and love to each other.

The phrase 'a kind of like a showing' is incorrect. It should be 'a way of showing'. Also, 'loving each other' should be 'love to each other' for correct expression.

× And there it's a big connection with you and others also.

✓ And there is a big connection between you and others as well.

The phrase 'with you and others' should be 'between you and others' to correctly express connection. Also, 'there it's' should be 'there is'.

× And it's a kind of bridge with you and the others as well because when somebody comes over you and that is a kind of shot.

✓ And it's a kind of bridge between you and others as well because when somebody comes over to you, it is a kind of gesture.

The phrase 'bridge with you and the others' should be 'bridge between you and others'. 'Comes over you' should be 'comes over to you'. 'Shot' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'gesture'.