Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Give a direct, concise topic sentence about your current ability, then add one brief specific reason or example. Use correct tense and grammar (e.g., "I'm not as good now as I was when I was a child"). Keep to two or three sentences and avoid unnecessary repetition.

Ejemplo: I used to have a very good memory as a child, but I'm not as good now. For example, I could easily remember phone numbers and names at school, but now I often forget small details because I’m busy with work.

Sugerencia: Start with a full topic sentence answering the question, then give one specific recent example with clear sequencing and correct grammar. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'last week' and fix sentence fragments. Aim for two to three coherent sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have forgotten important things several times. For example, last week I missed an important meeting with my colleagues because I had double-booked myself with another appointment at the same time.

Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence and one or two specific examples of what you record and how the app helps. Use plural forms and correct verb forms (e.g., 'applications that record'). Use linking words like 'for example' or 'such as' to make it more specific.

Ejemplo: I don't need to rely on my memory much because I use apps that record my daily activities. For example, I set reminders for meetings and shopping lists, which helps me stay organized and reduces stress.

Sugerencia: Answer directly, then describe one reliable method with specific detail and correct expressions. Replace unclear phrases ('write it down on my nose') with realistic actions ('write it down in a notebook' or 'set reminders in an app'). Use linking words like 'then' or 'so' for coherence.

Ejemplo: I usually rely on my phone to remember important things: I write tasks in a notes app and set reminders. This way I get push notifications at the right time, so I rarely miss appointments.

× I think when I was a child I was good at memorizing, but when I grew up, my memory is not good as a child.

✓ I think when I was a child I was good at memorizing, but as I grew up, my memory is not as good as it was when I was a child.

The sentence mixes past and present comparisons incorrectly. Use 'as I grew up' and the comparative structure 'not as good as it was when I was a child' to compare past and present states clearly. Also include 'it was' to refer back to childhood memory. (Grammar problem type ID: 6)

× The last time I forgot was last week. I forgot that I had an important meetings with my colleagues, but I. Appointed with other people so it is at the same.

✓ The last time I forgot was last week. I forgot that I had an important meeting with my colleagues, but I had an appointment with other people at the same time.

Multiple errors: 'meetings' should be singular 'meeting' to match 'an important'; the fragment 'but I. Appointed' is incorrect; use past perfect 'had an appointment' to show sequence and 'at the same time' for timing. Maintain past tense throughout. (Grammar problem type ID: 5)

× Actually I don't have to remember much because I use application that record my daily activities, so it helped me organize my time very well.

✓ Actually I don't have to remember much because I use an application that records my daily activities, so it helps me organize my time very well.

Several issues: missing article 'an' before 'application' and subject-verb agreement 'application that records' (third person singular). Also verb tense mismatch: use present tense 'helps' to match 'I use' and general fact. (Grammar problem type ID: 14)

× I enjoy using it a lot.

✓ I enjoy using it a lot.

This sentence is correct. 'Enjoy' agrees with the subject 'I' and no change is needed. No grammar problem from the provided list. (Grammar problem type ID: 2)

× Actually I don't want to remember it. I write it down on my nose or memorize it in my application.

✓ Actually I don't want to rely on memory. I write things down in my notes or store them in my application.

'Write it down on my nose' is incorrect and unclear; likely meant 'notes'. 'Memorize it in my application' is awkward; use 'store them in my application'. Also pronoun agreement: use 'things' and 'them' for plural references. (Grammar problem type ID: 12)

× I find it very helpful because it sends me the notification automatically.

✓ I find it very helpful because it sends me notifications automatically.

Minor issue: use plural 'notifications' for general regular alerts and keep present simple 'sends' which is correct. The original 'the notification' implies a single specific notification; plural is more natural for repeated alerts. (Grammar problem type ID: 6)