Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and complete your example. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (uh, um), and give one specific example using a linking phrase. Keep it under 4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I am good at memorising things. For example, I rarely forget small tasks like appointments because I mentally associate them with daily routines, such as checking my phone after breakfast. Because I use consistent cues like time and routine, I can recall details easily.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and avoid repetition. Say 'No' or 'Yes' first, then give one concise reason or a specific hypothetical example using a linking word (e.g., 'however' or 'if'). Remove hesitations and unclear fragments.

Ejemplo: No, I haven't forgotten anything important so far. However, if I did, it would most likely involve something at home, such as misplacing a key, because I keep most important items in specific spots.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear topic sentence and list 2–3 specific items. Use linking words ('for example', 'also') and remove fillers. Be slightly more specific about routines (times, frequency) to enrich content.

Ejemplo: I need to remember several daily tasks, especially my exercise and diet schedules. For example, I work out every morning at 7 a.m. and follow a meal plan with three balanced meals, which helps me stay healthy and organised.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear method first, then a specific example and benefit. Use linking words like 'for example' and 'so' and avoid vague phrases ('judge that down'). Keep it to 2–3 concise sentences.

Ejemplo: I usually store important information in a reliable digital place. For example, I write memos in my personal Notion page and tag items by date, so I can quickly find them when needed.

× Uh, for example, I even remember things with.

✓ For example, I even remember things well.

The original sentence ends incompletely and uses an incorrect preposition 'with' without an object. This is a sentence structure issue and relates to choosing the correct form to complete the thought. Replacing the fragment with 'well' completes the sentence and conveys the intended meaning that the speaker remembers things effectively. Suggestion: finish thoughts and use appropriate adverbs (e.g., well, clearly) or provide an object after 'with'.

× As I mentioned before, I am I'm really good at memorizing things.

✓ As I mentioned before, I'm really good at memorizing things.

The original has a redundancy 'I am I'm' combining two forms of the verb to be. This is a present tense phrasing error and a sentence structure problem. Removing the duplication yields the correct present tense contraction. Suggestion: read sentences aloud to catch duplicated words and remove the extra auxiliary.

× So I for till now, I don't have any experience, uh, forgetting any important things at all.

✓ So, up till now, I haven't had any experience of forgetting anything important.

The original mixes present simple 'don't have' with awkward adverb placement 'for till now' and wordiness. The corrected version uses present perfect 'haven't had' (appropriate for experience up to now) and cleaner phrasing 'up till now' and 'forgetting anything important.' Suggestion: use present perfect to talk about experiences up to the present and place time expressions like 'up till now' at the beginning or end of the clause.

× So if I were that, it might be related to about my home.

✓ If I did forget something, it would probably be related to something at home.

The original 'If I were that' is ungrammatical and mixes conditional forms incorrectly; 'might be related to about my home' has redundant prepositions. The corrected sentence uses a second conditional/realistic hypothetical 'If I did forget' and 'would probably be related to something at home.' Suggestion: use clear conditional forms ('If I did X, I would...') and avoid redundant prepositions ('related to about' is incorrect).

× Well, yeah, there are several things I have to remember in my daily lives.

✓ Well, yeah, there are several things I have to remember in my daily life.

The noun 'life' should be singular when referring to one person's routine; 'daily lives' is plural and incorrect here. Use 'daily life' to refer to the speaker's everyday routine. Suggestion: match singular/plural nouns to the subject (one person => singular).

× Uh, First off, uh, I need to remember about my daily routines such as, uh, working out routines and my, you know, diets schedule.

✓ First off, I need to remember my daily routines, such as my workout routine and my diet schedule.

Problems include unnecessary preposition 'about' after 'remember,' plural/singular mismatch 'working out routines' and 'diets schedule,' and missing possessive/article usage. Corrected: remove 'about,' use singular 'workout routine' or plural consistently, and 'diet schedule' (or 'diet's schedule' is incorrect). Suggestion: use 'remember' directly with the object, keep consistent singular/plural forms, and use possessives or articles appropriately ('my workout routine', 'my diet schedule').

× Well, in my case I tried to judge that down into somewhere safe where I can easily access later.

✓ Well, in my case I try to jot that down somewhere safe where I can easily access it later.

The original uses 'tried to judge that down' which is incorrect verb choice and mixes past tense 'tried' with present 'can access later.' The intended meaning is to write notes, so 'try to jot that down' in present tense or 'I try to jot that down' fits the habitual action. Also add the pronoun 'it' after 'access.' Suggestion: use appropriate verbs ('jot down' for writing a quick note), keep tense consistent for habitual actions (present simple), and include necessary objects ('access it').

× Uh, for example, I mostly write a memo in my personal notion which is a web page where I can.

✓ For example, I usually write a memo in my personal Notion page, which is a web app where I can store information.

The original sentence is incomplete ('where I can.'), uses 'a web page' imprecisely, and inconsistent capitalization of 'Notion' (proper noun). The corrected sentence completes the clause and uses 'web app' or 'Notion page' to clarify. Suggestion: complete clauses, use correct proper noun capitalization, and choose precise terms ('Notion' is an app/product).