Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise and coherent: start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct grammar (verb tenses, articles) and avoid unclear phrases like "I usually got important things in big event." Use varied vocabulary such as "good at", "remember", "memorise", and avoid redundancy.

Ejemplo: I'm not very good at memorising things now. However, when I was in senior high I could memorise long articles quickly, which helped with exams. But these days I rely more on notes and reminders because I focus on understanding rather than rote memorisation.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and use correct tense and clear details: state the incident briefly, explain why it happened, and mention the result or how you fixed it. Use linking words like "because" and "so". Avoid vague or contradictory phrases such as "my mom forgot me."

Ejemplo: Yes, I have. For example, I forgot my mother's birthday last month because I was very busy at work. As a result she was upset, so I apologised and took her out for dinner to make it up to her.

Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence and two specific categories with examples. Use linking words like "for example" and "in addition". Improve grammar and word choice: say "my personal life and my work" and "important family events."

Ejemplo: In daily life I need to remember two main things: work responsibilities and family events. For example, at work I must recall project deadlines and technical details, and in my personal life I remember birthdays and appointments with my family.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear statement of your main method, then give a specific example of the tools and how you use them, using linking words like "for instance" or "because." Correct grammar: combine fragments and use full sentences.

Ejemplo: I usually use digital tools to remember important things. For instance, I set reminders and calendar events in Outlook, and I also add notes with alarm notifications so the app alerts me in advance.

× Currently, I'm not good at memorizing things.

✓ Currently, I'm not good at remembering things.

'Memorizing' is acceptable but native phrasing often uses 'remembering' for general ability; however this is stylistic rather than strict grammar. Keep present continuous 'I'm not' for current state.

× I usually got important things in big event, but I remember the one I was a child in Senior High School.

✓ I usually forget important things at big events, but I remember when I was a child in Senior High School.

The student used 'got' incorrectly instead of 'forget' and wrong preposition 'in'. Use simple present 'usually forget' for habitual action and past simple 'was' for past state. Replace 'in big event' with 'at big events' and 'the one I was a child' with 'when I was a child'.

× I was used to remember all the details of article.

✓ I used to remember all the details of articles.

'Used to' with a past habit is followed by the base verb, not 'to remember' after 'was used to'. Also 'article' needs plural or an article: 'articles'. Use 'I used to' for past habitual action.

× Definitely. Uh, last month I've got my mother's birthday.

✓ Definitely. Uh, last month I missed my mother's birthday.

'Last month' is a specific past time and requires past simple, not present perfect. 'Got my mother's birthday' is incorrect verb choice; use 'missed my mother's birthday' to express forgetting or failing to acknowledge it.

× But after that I said sorry to my mom because I was busy with my work and my mom forgot me.

✓ But after that I apologized to my mom because I was busy with work, and my mom forgave me.

'Said sorry' is colloquial; 'apologized' is better. 'My mom forgot me' is incorrect: likely intended 'forgave me' or 'was upset with me'. Choose 'forgave me' to make sense. Also remove redundant 'my' in 'my work' to 'work' for natural phrasing.

× Well, in my daily life it can be divided into part my life and my work.

✓ Well, in my daily life it can be divided into two parts: my personal life and my work life.

Missing 'two' and wrong word order 'part my life'. Use 'divided into two parts' and clarify 'personal life' and 'work life'.

× Normally I need to remember all the details and knowledge in my work and besides that I also need to the big event in my family.

✓ Normally I need to remember all the details and knowledge for my work, and I also need to remember important family events.

'All the details and knowledge in my work' should be 'for my work'. Missing verb 'remember' before 'the big event'. Use 'important family events' for natural plural and meaning.

× Normally I prefer to use some application to help me remember the important things such as the calendar.

✓ Normally I prefer to use an application to help me remember important things, such as a calendar.

Use indefinite article 'an' before a singular noun 'application' and 'a calendar'. Remove 'the' before 'important things' because it's general rather than specific.

× In Outlook. There are some functions can remind me in advance and to keep it in mind.

✓ In Outlook, there are some functions that can remind me in advance and help me keep them in mind.

Fragment 'In Outlook.' should be combined with the next sentence. Add relative pronoun 'that' after 'functions'. Use parallel structure 'remind me' and 'help me keep them in mind' and plural pronoun 'them' for 'important things'.