Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 문장 구성과 문법 오류를 고치고, 답변을 더 자연스럽고 간결하게 만드세요. 주제 문장을 명확히 하고, supporting detail은 연결어를 사용해 논리적으로 연결하십시오. 예를 들어 현재 시제와 반복습관을 설명할 때 'I' 주어와 동사 형태를 일관되게 사용하세요. 또한 'this method help me' 같은 문법 오류를 수정하고 불필요한 중복을 피하세요.

Ejemplo: Yes, I am fairly good at memorising things. I often remember important dates, like my birthday, by repeating them regularly, which also helps me recall names and other important information.

Sugerencia: 시제 일치와 문법을 개선하세요. 과거 사건을 말할 때는 과거 시제를 일관되게 사용하고, 이유와 결과를 연결어로 명확히 하세요. 또한 'I was check' 같은 문법 오류를 수정하고, 불필요한 단어를 줄여 응답을 간결하게 만드세요.

Ejemplo: Yes, once I missed a university exam last year because the date was changed and I wasn't notified. It was very embarrassing, so since then I always check my timetable carefully to avoid the same mistake.

Sugerencia: 응답을 더 자연스럽게 다듬고 연결어를 사용해 항목을 나열하세요. 숫자 표현은 단어로 쓰거나 올바른 형식을 사용하고, 각 항목에 대해 간단한 설명을 추가해 구체성을 높이세요.

Ejemplo: I have two main things to remember in my daily life: my university lectures and my part-time job shifts. I need to keep track of lecture times and deadlines, and also the hours I am scheduled to work.

Sugerencia: 문장을 더 자연스럽고 문법적으로 정확하게 고치세요. 'Many scheduled at a glance' 같은 어색한 문장은 명확한 표현으로 바꾸고, 연결어로 이유와 예시를 연결하세요. 또한 단어 선택을 개선해 구체적으로 설명하세요.

Ejemplo: I usually use my laptop to remember important things because I carry it with me every day. For example, I keep a digital calendar and set reminders so I can see all my appointments and deadlines at a glance.

× As I am.

✓ So am I.

The student used 'As I am' which is not a natural reply to 'Are you good at memorising things?'. Use 'So am I' to agree with a positive statement about ability. 'As' as a conjunction is incorrect here; 'So' plus auxiliary verb matches subject-auxiliary inversion for agreement.

× For example, I can easily memorize dates such as my birthday because I repeat them often with this method help me recall names and important things quickly.

✓ For example, I can easily memorize dates such as my birthday because I repeat them often; this method helps me recall names and important things quickly.

The original is a run-on with missing connector and incorrect verb form. Separate into two clauses and use 'helps' (third person singular) to agree with 'this method'. Use a semicolon or period to join related independent clauses.

× Last year I forgot my university test because it was changing to another date so I missed the exam.

✓ Last year I missed my university test because its date was changed, so I missed the exam.

Mixes tenses and uses awkward passive/continuous. Use past simple 'was changed' or 'had been changed' to indicate the date was altered before the exam. Also 'forgot my university test' is unclear; 'missed my university test' matches intended meaning.

× It was really embarrassing and since then I was check my timetable carefully.

✓ It was really embarrassing and since then I have checked my timetable carefully.

Incorrect tense after 'since then'. Use present perfect 'have checked' to show an action that started in the past and continues to the present. Also 'was check' is ungrammatical; replace with auxiliary 'have' + past participle.

× I think there are two types of my main schedule.

✓ I think there are two main types of schedule in my life.

Word order and quantifier use is awkward. 'Two main types of schedule' is clearer than 'two types of my main schedule'. Reorder for natural English.

× First my university lessons and 2nd is my part time job schedule.

✓ First, my university lessons, and second, my part-time job schedule.

Maintain parallel structure: both items should be presented similarly. Use hyphen in 'part-time' and commas for clarity. No need for 'is' when listing parallel items.

× I usually use my laptop to remember important things because I have it every day.

✓ I usually use my laptop to remember important things because I use it every day.

'Have it every day' is odd when meaning 'use it every day'. Use 'use' to match the purpose. No -ing change needed here; correction uses appropriate verb.

× For instance, I use a digital calendar which helps. Many scheduled at a glance.

✓ For instance, I use a digital calendar which helps me see my schedule at a glance.

The fragment 'Many scheduled at a glance' is ungrammatical. Combine ideas into one sentence and include object 'me' and verb 'see' to express how the calendar helps. 'Schedule' should be singular when referring to 'my schedule'.