Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법 오류가 있습니다. 예를 들어, 'they gives'는 'they give'로 수정해야 하며, 문장이 중복되고 불필요한 'uh'가 많아 명확성이 떨어집니다. 또한, 답변이 구체적이지 않고 연결어가 부족합니다. 좀 더 간결하고 명확하게 자신의 경험을 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Ejemplo: Yes, I am quite good at memorising because during my studies in Korea, the learning system required us to memorize a lot of information through regular homework assignments.

Sugerencia: 답변이 불완전하고 문법적으로 부정확합니다. 'forgets'는 'forgot'로 수정해야 하며, 문장이 끝나지 않아 의미 전달이 어렵습니다. 또한, 불필요한 반복과 'uh'가 많아 자연스럽지 않습니다. 질문에 직접 답하고 구체적인 상황을 덧붙여 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Ejemplo: Yes, I once forgot my mother's birthday, which was very embarrassing for me. It happened last year when I was very busy with work.

Sugerencia: 답변이 미완성이고 문장이 끊겨 있어 명확한 의사 전달이 어렵습니다. 'have it on the right time' 대신 'take it at the right time'이 자연스럽습니다. 또한, 추가적인 내용을 연결어와 함께 구체적으로 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Ejemplo: I need to remember to take my medication on time every day because of my health condition. Besides that, I also try to remember important appointments and meetings.

Sugerencia: 답변에 불필요한 'uh'가 많고 문법 오류가 있습니다. 'follow that rules'는 'follow those rules'로 수정해야 하며, 문장이 다소 어색합니다. 좀 더 자연스럽고 명확하게 자신의 방법을 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Ejemplo: I mainly use Google Calendar to keep track of important schedules, and I always follow the reminders, which makes managing my time very convenient.

× they gives, uh, lot of homework that includes memorizing.

✓ they give, uh, a lot of homework that includes memorizing.

The subject 'they' is plural, so the verb should be 'give' instead of 'gives'. Also, 'lot of homework' needs the article 'a' before 'lot'.

× I accidentally, uh, forgets my mother's birthday and that happened when.

✓ I accidentally, uh, forgot my mother's birthday and that happened when.

The verb 'forgets' is incorrect for the first person singular past action; it should be 'forgot' to match the past tense context.

× I accidentally, uh, forgets my mother's birthday and that happened when.

✓ I accidentally, uh, forgot my mother's birthday and that happened when.

The action happened in the past, so the verb should be in past tense 'forgot' instead of present tense 'forgets'.

× I studied English at Korea, uh, learning system

✓ I studied English in Korea's learning system

The preposition 'at' is incorrect for countries; 'in' is used. Also, possessive form 'Korea's' is needed to show the learning system belongs to Korea.

× I use, uh, mainly a Google Calendar to, uh, memorize the schedule I have when it, it is important and I, uh, follow that rules and that is so comfortable with me.

✓ I mainly use Google Calendar to memorize the schedule I have when it is important, and I follow those rules, which is very convenient for me.

The pronoun 'that rules' is incorrect; 'those rules' is correct for plural. Also, 'that is so comfortable with me' is awkward; 'which is very convenient for me' is better.