Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: この回答は文法的な誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。自然な英語表現を使い、簡潔に答えることを心がけましょう。また、話の流れをスムーズにするために接続詞を使うと良いです。

Ejemplo: I used to be good at memorising things, especially when I was studying for school tests. However, recently I have noticed that my memory is not as sharp as before, so I sometimes forget things.

Sugerencia: 回答が途中で終わっており、内容が不十分です。質問に直接答えた後、理由や状況を具体的に説明し、接続詞を使って話をつなげましょう。

Ejemplo: Yes, I once forgot the date of an important meeting that was related to an internship opportunity. This happened because I had overlapping schedules and I didn't check my calendar carefully.

Sugerencia: 文法と語彙の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。簡潔で明確な文章を作り、接続詞を使って論理的に説明しましょう。

Ejemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember many things in order of priority. Therefore, I write down my schedule so that I can easily see and manage my tasks.

Sugerencia: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、繰り返しや冗長な表現があります。より自然で簡潔な表現を使い、接続詞で文をつなげましょう。

Ejemplo: Now, I use the calendar app on my mobile phone to set reminders for important events. It notifies me a day, a week, or a few hours before the meeting, which helps me remember.

× I used to be get up to memorizing things and when I took the test at school I almost I almost answered everything.

✓ I used to get up to memorizing things and when I took the test at school I almost answered everything.

The phrase 'used to be get up to' is incorrect. 'Used to' should be followed directly by the base verb form without 'be'. Also, 'memorizing' is correctly used as a gerund here. Remove 'be' to correct the sentence.

× But now my memorizing capacity awaken and I forget sometimes.

✓ But now my memorizing capacity has awakened and I forget sometimes.

The verb 'awaken' should be in the past participle form 'awakened' to correctly form the present perfect tense with 'has'. This indicates a change that has occurred up to now.

× Yes, uh, one day I forgot the date of meeting, which is important to get the umm, opportunity for internship.

✓ Yes, uh, one day I forgot the date of the meeting, which was important to get the opportunity for an internship.

The phrase 'date of meeting' needs the definite article 'the' before 'meeting'. Also, 'which is important' should be 'which was important' to match the past tense context. 'An' is needed before 'internship' as it starts with a vowel sound.

× I forgot because umm, the schedule was overlapped and yeah, the.

✓ I forgot because, umm, the schedule overlapped and, yeah, that was the reason.

The verb 'overlapped' does not require 'was' before it; it should be in simple past tense. Also, the sentence was incomplete; adding 'that was the reason' clarifies the meaning.

× For me to remembering, umm, many things, umm, in the priority or in order, I think, uh, I need to lie down, write down the schedule and easily, uh, it helps me easily see, umm, the schedule is setting.

✓ For me to remember many things in order of priority, I think I need to lie down, write down the schedule, and it helps me easily see the schedule is set.

'To remembering' is incorrect; after 'to' the base verb 'remember' should be used. 'In the priority or in order' is better expressed as 'in order of priority'. 'Schedule is setting' should be 'schedule is set' to indicate completion.

× How do you remember important things? How now I try to set the schedule at the calendar of this mobile phone, my mobile phone, so that reminds me before a day or a week or sometimes or hours before this meeting or schedule.

✓ Now I try to set the schedule on the calendar of my mobile phone, so it reminds me a day, a week, or sometimes hours before the meeting or schedule.

The preposition 'at' is incorrect with 'calendar'; 'on' is the correct preposition. Also, 'so that reminds me' should be 'so it reminds me' for clarity. The phrase 'before a day or a week or sometimes or hours before' is reordered for naturalness.

× So that helps me remind.

✓ So that helps me remember.

The verb 'remind' requires an object; here, 'remember' is the correct verb to express the intended meaning of recalling information.