Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 你的回答中有很多犹豫词（如"umm"）和重复表达，影响了流畅性。建议回答时尽量简洁明了，避免重复和犹豫词，同时注意语法时态的一致性。

Ejemplo: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things because recently I have been preparing for the SAT exams. For example, I need to remember around 200 vocabulary words each day, which requires a lot of memorization.

Sugerencia: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议使用简单句子直接回答问题，并用具体例子支持，同时注意主谓一致和时态。

Ejemplo: Yes, I often forget important things in my daily life. For instance, I frequently lose my phone because I forget where I put it, which confuses me.

Sugerencia: 回答较长且重复，表达不够连贯。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并且简洁表达主要内容。

Ejemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember to do household chores that my mom asks me to do. However, sometimes I forget because I am focused on my work, studies, or playing on my phone.

Sugerencia: 回答中有重复词汇，表达不够自然。建议简洁明了地描述方法，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ejemplo: I usually make a list and stick it on the wall in my room to remind myself of important tasks. Whenever I go out, I check the list and mark the tasks after completing them.

× So I will say yes, because nowadays I was preparing for umm SAT exams.

✓ So I will say yes, because nowadays I am preparing for umm SAT exams.

句中使用了过去时态“was preparing”，但“nowadays”表示现在的时间，应该使用现在进行时“am preparing”。

× So I need to like one day I need to remember umm, vocabulary app to 200 what is, which is really a large, large amount of umm, memorizing umm, something.

✓ So I need to, like, one day remember 200 vocabulary words, which is really a large amount of memorizing.

“vocabulary app to 200 what is”表达不清且词汇数量应使用复数形式“words”，句子结构混乱，需要简化和调整。

× Yes, in my daily life I have so many that kind of experience because I was kind of person really.

✓ Yes, in my daily life I have had so many of that kind of experience because I am really that kind of person.

“have so many that kind of experience”中“that”应为“that kind”，且时态应与现在完成时“have had”匹配，后半句“was kind of person”应为现在时“am that kind of person”。

× We lost something like my phones, whenever I put it, I will forget it right away, which is really confused for me why I became that kind of person.

✓ I lose things like my phone; whenever I put it somewhere, I forget it right away, which really confuses me why I have become that kind of person.

“We lost”应为“I lose”以符合主语和时态；“phones”应为单数“phone”；“confused”应为“confuses”；“became”应为现在完成时“have become”。

× So every time my mom will ask me to like do some household but sometimes I will forget because I was like putting all my concentration in my works and also like in the study and also like some entertainment like playing the cell phone which I will always forget this important things my mom asked.

✓ So every time my mom asks me to do some household chores, but sometimes I forget because I put all my concentration into my work, studying, and also entertainment like playing on my cell phone, so I always forget the important things my mom asks.

“do some household”应为“do some household chores”；“putting all my concentration in my works”应为“put all my concentration into my work”；“playing the cell phone”应为“playing on my cell phone”；“this important things”应为“the important things”。

× So I will try to make making a list or platform in my my room and stick stick it on the wall to remind me.

✓ So I will try to make a list or a platform in my room and stick it on the wall to remind me.

“make making”重复，应去掉“making”；“stick stick it”重复，应去掉一个“stick”；“platform”用法不当，建议用“list”或“board”。

× Every time I will go outside I will suddenly discover the thing I need to accomplish and after doing that I will mark it.

✓ Every time I go outside, I suddenly discover the things I need to accomplish, and after doing that, I mark them.

“Every time I will go outside”应为“Every time I go outside”，表示习惯动作用一般现在时；“the thing”应为复数“the things”；“I will mark it”应为一般现在时“I mark them”。