Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: ควรใช้ประโยคที่ชัดเจนและถูกต้องทางไวยากรณ์มากขึ้น และหลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำที่ไม่เหมาะสม เช่น 'breakdown' ควรใช้คำที่สื่อความหมายได้ตรงกว่า เช่น 'not very good at remembering things' และควรจัดระเบียบคำตอบให้เป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น

Ejemplo: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, my friends often ask me why I forget things so easily, and I don't really know why.

Sugerencia: ควรปรับปรุงโครงสร้างประโยคให้ถูกต้องและชัดเจน เช่น ใช้ประโยคที่สื่อความหมายได้ตรงและมีความเชื่อมโยง เช่น 'I sometimes forget important things because I work too hard and don't get enough sleep'

Ejemplo: Yes, I sometimes forget important things because I work too hard and don't get enough sleep, which affects my memory.

Sugerencia: ควรใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อทำให้คำตอบลื่นไหลและเพิ่มรายละเอียดที่ชัดเจน เช่น อธิบายว่าทำไมการจำขั้นตอนงานจึงสำคัญ และอาจยกตัวอย่างเพิ่มเติม

Ejemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember my work routine and follow it step by step. This is very important, especially when I work with my team, to ensure everything runs smoothly.

Sugerencia: ควรใช้ประโยคที่ชัดเจนและมีโครงสร้างดีขึ้น เช่น อธิบายวิธีการจำอย่างเป็นระบบ และใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหล

Ejemplo: I usually remind myself repeatedly and sometimes take notes if something is really important, because I tend to forget things easily.

× No, my memory is uh, breakdown.

✓ No, my memory is, uh, broken down.

The phrase 'memory is breakdown' is incorrect because 'breakdown' is a noun, not an adjective. The correct adjective form is 'broken down' to describe the state of memory.

× I'm really not good in memory anything.

✓ I'm really not good at memorising anything.

The correct preposition to use with 'good' in this context is 'at', not 'in'. Also, 'memory anything' is incorrect; the verb 'memorising' fits better here.

× For example sometime my friend say to me why you really forgotten so I don't know.

✓ For example, sometimes my friend says to me, 'Why have you really forgotten?' so I don't know.

'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' for frequency. 'Friend' is singular, so the verb should be 'says'. The sentence structure is corrected to include proper question form and punctuation.

× Yes, I always gotten something important that is my because I may be work too hard at least to take a sleep.

✓ Yes, I have always forgotten something important because I may work too hard and don't get enough sleep.

'Gotten' is incorrectly used; 'forgotten' fits the context. The sentence structure is improved for clarity and correct tense usage.

× That's why maybe effect to me to forgetful.

✓ That's why it may affect me and make me forgetful.

'Effect to me' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'affect me'. Also, 'to forgetful' is incorrect; 'make me forgetful' is appropriate.

× In my daily life, I just remember the routine of work every day, so I just do step by step.

✓ In my daily life, I just remember the work routine every day, so I do it step by step.

'Routine of work' is better expressed as 'work routine'. Added 'it' for clarity in 'do it step by step'.

× That thing is really important to me, especially when I go to work with my team.

✓ That is really important to me, especially when I go to work with my team.

'That thing' is informal; 'That' is sufficient. The rest is correct.

× I just remind myself again and again sometime take note if really important and I think I may be forgettable after hearing that because sometime I forgetful.

✓ I just remind myself again and again, sometimes take notes if it's really important, and I think I may forget after hearing that because sometimes I am forgetful.

'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'Take note' should be plural 'take notes'. 'May be forgettable' is incorrect; 'may forget' is correct. 'I forgetful' should be 'I am forgetful'.