Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid awkward phrases like "memorize everything like a desire" which is unclear. Try to provide a direct topic sentence followed by a brief explanation or example. Also, watch for grammar and word choice to sound more natural.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have a good memory, especially during my school days when I often memorized important information to prepare for exams.

Sugerencia: Your answer contains many hesitations and some unclear phrasing, which affects fluency and clarity. Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, avoid filler words like "uh" and practice smoother sentence flow.

Ejemplo: Yes, I once forgot an important detail before an exam. The night before, I couldn't remember which school the test was at, but fortunately, I asked some friends and they helped me find the location.

Sugerencia: Your answer is quite detailed and personal, which is good. However, it could be more organized with clearer linking words to improve coherence. Also, try to avoid vague phrases like "my life" and be more specific about what routines or boundaries you mean.

Ejemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember my schedule and important tasks. Additionally, I remind myself to stay positive, ignore negative comments, and always try my best to improve.

Sugerencia: Your answer explains your method well but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use simpler, clearer sentences and avoid repetition. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: I usually write important information in my notebook or take photos with my phone. Then, I review them regularly to help me remember better.

× I used to memorize everything like a desire.

✓ I used to memorize everything with great desire.

The phrase 'like a desire' is incorrect because 'desire' is a noun and cannot be used with 'like' in this context. The correct preposition is 'with' to express the manner of memorizing, and 'great desire' properly conveys strong motivation.

× I once some forgot something pretty important, uh, for the next day I had an, uh, an important exam and I the night before that I forgot which school I'd be doing the test and but gladly I remembered and asked a few people and they helped me through it.

✓ I once forgot something pretty important. The next day I had an important exam, and the night before that, I forgot which school I'd be taking the test at. But luckily, I remembered and asked a few people, and they helped me through it.

The original sentence is a run-on with unclear structure and missing words. Breaking it into shorter sentences improves clarity. Also, 'doing the test' is better expressed as 'taking the test', and 'luckily' is more appropriate than 'gladly' in this context.

× I forgot which school I'd be doing the test and but gladly I remembered and asked a few people and they helped me through it.

✓ I forgot which school I'd be taking the test at, but luckily I remembered and asked a few people, and they helped me through it.

The verb 'doing the test' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'taking the test'. Also, the preposition 'at' is needed after 'test' to indicate location. 'Gladly' is replaced with 'luckily' to better express fortunate circumstance.

× I think all I need to remember is just my life, my routine, my boundaries and some tips that I need to remind myself every single day.

✓ I think all I need to remember is just my life, my routine, my boundaries, and some tips that I need to remind myself of every single day.

The verb 'remind' requires the preposition 'of' when followed by the object. Omitting 'of' leads to incorrect usage. Adding 'of' after 'remind myself' corrects the sentence.

× Like be positive, don't let others comments bother you and don't be afraid of anything.

✓ Like be positive, don't let others' comments bother you, and don't be afraid of anything.

The possessive form 'others'' is needed to indicate that the comments belong to other people. Without the apostrophe, 'others comments' is incorrect.

× Try your best, be the best version of yourself, be yourself, love as much as you can and don't trust the fake ones.

✓ Try your best, be the best version of yourself, be yourself, love as much as you can, and don't trust fake people.

The phrase 'the fake ones' is vague and informal. Replacing it with 'fake people' is clearer and more appropriate in this context.

× Most of the time I try to write them down on my notebook or I just try to take a picture of them in my phone and then I try to we watch it over and over again, review it actually and then I would memorize them and won't forget them that easily.

✓ Most of the time I try to write them down in my notebook or I just try to take a picture of them on my phone, and then I try to watch it over and over again, actually review it, and then I memorize them and won't forget them that easily.

The correct preposition is 'in' for 'write them down in my notebook' and 'on' for 'take a picture on my phone'. Also, 'try to we watch' is incorrect; it should be 'try to watch'. The sentence is corrected for prepositions and clarity.