Part 1
Examinador
Are you good at memorising things?
Candidato
Yes, I will say I'm good at memorizing. This is because I'm a Chinese literature MA students and I need to memorize tons of tasks of Chinese literatures. So for example some poem or some factions.
Examinador
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Candidato
Yes of course. I think everyone has some experience like that. I remember I had forgot my examinations day of my courses and I just forgot to go to finish the exam. I finally got off in that courses.
Examinador
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Candidato
I would say the schedules because I'm a college student and I have tons of homework and assessment. I then I need to remember all the due date and the plan and also I need to remember thousands of classic poem and story since I am a Chinese literature.
Examinador
How do you remember important things?
Candidato
I will.
Are you good at memorising things?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: 回答时语法和表达不够准确,且内容有些重复。建议简洁明了地表达观点,并用恰当的词汇和句式。
Ejemplo: Yes, I am good at memorising because as a Chinese literature master's student, I often need to remember many poems and literary works for my studies.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不够清晰。建议使用正确的时态和句式,避免重复,并具体描述事件。
Ejemplo: Yes, I once forgot the date of an important exam and missed it, which caused me to fail that course.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: 回答中有语法和表达不流畅的问题,建议简化句子结构,使用连词使表达更连贯。
Ejemplo: I need to remember my schedules, including homework deadlines and study plans. Also, as a Chinese literature student, I have to memorise many classic poems and stories.
How do you remember important things?
Puntuación: 20.0Sugerencia: 回答不完整,缺乏具体内容。建议详细说明记忆方法,并举例说明。
Ejemplo: I usually write important things down in a planner and review them regularly to make sure I don't forget.
× I will say I'm good at memorizing. This is because I'm a Chinese literature MA students and I need to memorize tons of tasks of Chinese literatures.
✓ I will say I'm good at memorizing. This is because I'm a Chinese literature MA student and I need to memorize tons of tasks of Chinese literature.
这里的'students'应为单数'student',因为主语是单数的'I'm'。'literatures'应为不可数名词'literature',表示学科。
× So for example some poem or some factions.
✓ So for example some poems or some fictions.
'poem'应为复数'poems',因为前面有'some'表示复数。'factions'应为'fictions',意指小说类作品。
× I remember I had forgot my examinations day of my courses and I just forgot to go to finish the exam.
✓ I remember I had forgotten the examination day of my courses and I just forgot to go to finish the exam.
'had forgot'应为过去完成时的过去分词形式'had forgotten'。
× I finally got off in that courses.
✓ I finally got off in that course.
'courses'应为单数'course',因为指的是具体的一门课程。
× I would say the schedules because I'm a college student and I have tons of homework and assessment.
✓ I would say the schedules because I'm a college student and I have tons of homework and assessments.
'assessment'应为复数'assessments',因为前面有'tons of'表示复数。
× I then I need to remember all the due date and the plan and also I need to remember thousands of classic poem and story since I am a Chinese literature.
✓ Then I need to remember all the due dates and the plans and also I need to remember thousands of classic poems and stories since I am a Chinese literature student.
'due date'和'plan'应为复数形式'due dates'和'plans','poem'和'story'应为复数'poems'和'stories','Chinese literature'后应加'student'表示身份。
× I will.
✓ I will use some methods to remember important things.
句子不完整,缺少谓语和宾语,导致表达不清晰。需要补充完整句子以表达完整意思。