Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for better flow. For example, instead of 'gave birth child', say 'gave birth to a child'. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: I used to be good at memorizing things when I was younger, but since I gave birth to my child recently, I feel my memory isn't as sharp, so I rely more on reading to remember.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. Avoid repeating phrases like 'I should have'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I once forgot an important online meeting because I didn't set an alarm. As a result, I apologized and rescheduled the meeting to make up for it.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but could be clearer and more natural. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct grammar mistakes, such as 'I sometimes forget that it's Monday'.

Ejemplo: I need to remember that my son has a clarinet lesson every Monday, so I have to pick him up from school. Sometimes I forget the day, but I try to keep track of the schedule carefully.

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear but can be improved by combining sentences and using linking words for coherence. Also, correct grammar mistakes like 'whenever I forgot' to 'whenever I forget'.

Ejemplo: I remember important things by writing them down in my monthly planner. Whenever I forget what I need to do, I simply flip through the pages to check my schedule.

× Currently I'm not good at memorizing things.

✓ Currently I'm not good at memorising things.

The original sentence uses 'memorizing' with a 'z', which is American English spelling. Since the question uses 'memorising' with an 's' (British English), it is better to keep consistent spelling. Also, 'memorising' is the correct gerund form here, so no grammatical error but spelling consistency is important.

× I gave birth child and because of that maybe I feel like I'm not a good memorizer anymore so I have to read.

✓ I gave birth to a child and because of that maybe I feel like I'm not a good memorizer anymore so I have to read.

The phrase 'gave birth child' is missing the preposition 'to' and the article 'a' before 'child'. The correct phrase is 'gave birth to a child'. This is a common prepositional error.

× I should have set up the alarm, but I forgot the meeting online, so I apologized about that and I should have and I had to set up another meeting.

✓ I should have set the alarm, but I forgot about the meeting online, so I apologized for that and I had to set up another meeting.

The phrase 'set up the alarm' is incorrect; 'set the alarm' is the correct expression. Also, 'forgot the meeting online' is missing the preposition 'about'. 'Apologized about that' should be 'apologized for that'. These are prepositional and verb usage errors. Additionally, 'I should have and I had to set up another meeting' is awkward; 'I had to set up another meeting' suffices.

× Sometimes I forgot this is Monday but I try to memorize what time and what day what I should do.

✓ Sometimes I forget that it is Monday but I try to remember what time and what day I should do things.

The verb 'forgot' is past tense but the context requires present tense 'forget' because the action is habitual. Also, 'memorize' is better replaced with 'remember' here. The sentence structure is awkward and needs rephrasing for clarity.

× So sometimes whenever I forgot what I have to do, I just flip the page and check what I.

✓ So sometimes whenever I forget what I have to do, I just flip the page and check what I wrote.

The verb tense 'forgot' should be present tense 'forget' to match the habitual action. The sentence ends abruptly with 'check what I', which is incomplete. Adding 'wrote' completes the sentence meaningfully.