Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答は自然ですが、文法の誤りと冗長な表現があります。例えば、「I consider me as a absent minded person」は不自然で、「I consider myself an absent-minded person」が正しいです。また、文を簡潔にし、5文以内にまとめることを意識しましょう。

Ejemplo: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. I consider myself an absent-minded person because I often forget what I need to do or where I should go.

Sugerencia: 回答は具体的で内容も良いですが、文のつながりをスムーズにするために接続詞を工夫しましょう。また、「I remember one time」よりも「Once」など簡潔な表現が望ましいです。

Ejemplo: Yes, I have. Once, I forgot my internship interview and failed. Since then, I have made it a habit to set voice reminders to avoid forgetting important events.

Sugerencia: 回答は具体的ですが、「homeworks」は不可算名詞なので「homework」としましょう。また、接続詞を使って文をつなげるとより自然です。

Ejemplo: There are many things I need to remember daily. For example, I have to remember homework deadlines and also the dates of job interviews.

Sugerencia: 回答は内容が明確ですが、繰り返しの「Well well」は避け、文を簡潔にしましょう。また、「prevent me forgetting」より「prevent me from forgetting」が正しい表現です。

Ejemplo: I usually jot down notes on my phone, and if something is really important, I set a voice reminder to prevent me from forgetting it.

× I consider me as a absent minded person and actually I usually forget what to do or where to go when I'm.

✓ I consider myself an absent-minded person and actually I usually forget what to do or where to go sometimes.

The pronoun 'me' is incorrect here; the reflexive pronoun 'myself' should be used after 'consider'. Also, 'a absent minded' is incorrect; it should be 'an absent-minded' because 'absent' starts with a vowel sound. The sentence was incomplete at the end, so 'sometimes' is added for clarity.

× I remember one time I forgot my internship interview and of course I failed.

✓ I remember one time I forgot my internship interview and, of course, I failed.

A comma is needed after 'and' to separate clauses properly. The past tense 'forgot' and 'failed' are correct here.

× And since then I I've gotten into the habit of always setting a voice reminder.

✓ And since then, I've gotten into the habit of always setting a voice reminder.

The phrase 'I I've' is incorrect; it should be just 'I've'. Also, a comma after 'then' improves readability.

× Well, there are many things and tasks to remember in my everyday life.

✓ Well, there are many things and tasks to remember in my everyday life.

This sentence is correct; no change needed.

× For example, I need to remember the deadline of my homeworks, and it's also important to recall the dates of job interviews.

✓ For example, I need to remember the deadlines of my homework, and it's also important to recall the dates of job interviews.

'Homework' is an uncountable noun and does not have a plural form, so 'homeworks' is incorrect. Use 'deadlines' plural to match multiple tasks.

× Well well I usually jot it down or take a note on my phone and if it's really important I will set a voice reminder on my phone to prevent me forgetting.

✓ Well, well, I usually jot it down or take a note on my phone, and if it's really important, I will set a voice reminder on my phone to prevent forgetting.

The phrase 'to prevent me forgetting' is incorrect; 'to prevent forgetting' is correct because 'prevent' is followed by a gerund without a pronoun. Also, commas improve sentence clarity.