Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to make your answer more clear and concise. Start with a direct response, then explain with simple, connected sentences. Avoid repetition and incomplete thoughts. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' properly to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: Yes, I am good at memorising things because I focus on one task at a time. This helps me concentrate better and remember information more efficiently.

Sugerencia: Answer the question directly without asking the examiner a question. Use clear sentences and avoid repetition. Provide a personal example or reason to support your answer, using linking words like 'because' or 'for example'.

Ejemplo: I rarely forget important things because I pay close attention to them. For example, I always remember my salary day because it is important to me.

Sugerencia: Try to understand the question and answer it directly. Avoid saying you don't know the question. Give specific examples of things you need to remember daily, using linking words to connect your ideas.

Ejemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember appointments and tasks. For example, I always keep a list to remind myself of important meetings and deadlines.

Sugerencia: Your answer is good but can be clearer. Use linking words like 'for example' and 'because' properly. Avoid repeating phrases and incomplete sentences. Try to make your explanation more structured and concise.

Ejemplo: I remember important things by engaging with them actively. For example, I write notes and practice what I learn because this helps me memorize information faster.

× Because if you do that, the the concentration of the energy of concentration will be lost and will be not efficient.

✓ Because if you do that, the concentration of energy will be lost and it will not be efficient.

The phrase 'the the concentration of the energy of concentration' contains redundant articles and awkward phrasing. 'The' is repeated unnecessarily, and 'the energy of concentration' is better expressed as 'energy' without 'the' to sound natural. Also, 'will be not efficient' should be 'will not be efficient' for correct word order.

× And another thing so the as.

✓ And another thing is that...

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a clear structure. It seems the speaker intended to add another point but did not complete the sentence. A proper structure like 'And another thing is that...' is needed to introduce a new idea.

× Nobody forgets something that is important for you.

✓ Nobody forgets something that is important to them.

Using 'you' in this context is incorrect because the subject is 'nobody' (third person). The pronoun should agree with the subject, so 'them' is appropriate to refer back to 'nobody' in a gender-neutral way.

× So if something is is important the the person will invest in it and he will not forget it.

✓ So if something is important, the person will invest in it and he will not forget it.

There are repeated words 'is is' and 'the the' which are errors. Removing the duplicates corrects the sentence. Also, a comma after 'important' improves readability.

× I have a question for you. Do you think somebody will forget about the day he will take his salary?

✓ I have a question for you. Do you think somebody will forget the day they receive their salary?

Using 'he' assumes gender, which is better avoided in general statements. 'They' is a gender-neutral singular pronoun. Also, 'forget about the day he will take his salary' is awkward; 'forget the day they receive their salary' is more natural.

× So this need to remember something in my daily life is isn't.

✓ So this need to remember something in my daily life isn't there.

The phrase 'is isn't' is contradictory and incorrect. The correct form is 'isn't there' to express the absence of the need. Also, the sentence structure needs to be completed for clarity.

× I don't know the question So what do you mean by this question?

✓ I don't understand the question. What do you mean by it?

The original sentence is a run-on and lacks proper punctuation. Splitting into two sentences and rephrasing improves clarity and correctness.