Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答时应更自然流畅，避免重复表达，并且句子结构应更清晰。可以简洁地表达观点，并用具体例子支持。

Ejemplo: I'm not very good at memorising things because I often forget where I put my belongings. For instance, I sometimes leave my keys somewhere and can't remember the exact place later.

Sugerencia: 回答应更连贯，避免语法错误，使用连接词使叙述更流畅，同时细节描述应更具体。

Ejemplo: Yes, once during my vacation in Korea, I forgot my phone in a shop after buying a limited edition album. I only realized it when I got back to the hotel, which was quite stressful.

Sugerencia: 回答时应注意语法准确，句子结构完整，表达更清晰。可以用连接词使内容更连贯。

Ejemplo: There are many things I need to remember daily, but the most important is where my phone is. Since it contains my money, contacts, and personal information, losing it would cause a lot of trouble.

Sugerencia: 回答应更简洁且语法正确，避免重复，使用连接词使表达更自然。

Ejemplo: I remember important things by keeping a daily planner both on my phone and on paper. I stick notes on my wall and set alarms on my phone as reminders so I don't forget important tasks.

× I often put some items in the place that I have been to, but I forgot it immediately.

✓ I often put some items in places that I have been to, but I forget them immediately.

这里“place”应使用复数形式“places”，因为指多个地点；“forgot”应改为一般现在时“forget”，与前文“often”表示的习惯动作一致；“it”应改为“them”，指代复数“items”。

× I sometimes put them down somewhere and I forgot it where exactly it was.

✓ I sometimes put them down somewhere and I forget exactly where it is.

“forgot”应改为一般现在时“forget”，因为句子描述的是习惯性动作；“it was”应改为“it is”，保持时态一致。

× Last time vacation my friend and I went to a shop in Korea to buy a limited edition album, but I forgot my phone in the shop, and when I arrived at the hotel, I realized it.

✓ Last vacation, my friend and I went to a shop in Korea to buy a limited edition album, but I forgot my phone in the shop, and when I arrived at the hotel, I realized it.

“Last time vacation”表达不自然，应改为“Last vacation”；其他部分时态正确。

× But it's very unforgettable.

✓ But it's very memorable.

“unforgettable”是形容词，表示“难忘的”，但前文语境应表达“令人难忘的经历”，用“memorable”更合适；“very unforgettable”搭配不自然。

× I think there are many things that I need to remember every day, but the most important one is where my phone, because nowadays the phone is linked with my money and my friends, my family and my telephone, so it can cause a lot of inconvenience if I lost it.

✓ I think there are many things that I need to remember every day, but the most important one is where my phone is, because nowadays the phone is linked with my money, my friends, my family, and my telephone, so it can cause a lot of inconvenience if I lose it.

“where my phone”缺少动词，应加“is”；“my friends, my family and my telephone”中应加逗号分隔；“if I lost it”应改为“if I lose it”，保持时态一致。

× I prefer to have a daily book in my on my phone and on the paper.

✓ I prefer to have a daily book on my phone and on paper.

“in my on my phone”结构错误，应改为“on my phone”；“on the paper”改为“on paper”更自然。

× I stick the paper on the wall where I can see it every day.

✓ I stick the paper on the wall where I can see it every day.

此句无明显冠词错误，保持原句。

× And I set a alarm on my phone that as a reminder so I don't forget the important things.

✓ And I set an alarm on my phone as a reminder so I don't forget important things.

“a alarm”应改为“an alarm”，因为alarm以元音音素开头；“that as a reminder”结构错误，应改为“as a reminder”；“the important things”改为“important things”更自然。