Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答が不明瞭で文法的な誤りが多く、内容も具体性に欠けています。質問に直接答え、簡潔で明確な文を使い、具体的な例を加えることが重要です。

Ejemplo: I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, when I was in high school, I struggled to remember facts for subjects like history and social studies.

Sugerencia: 文法の誤りと意味の不明瞭さがあります。過去の経験を具体的に説明し、文を整理して話す練習をしましょう。

Ejemplo: Yes, I have. When I was in elementary school, I sometimes forgot promises I made to my friends, so I started taking notes to remember them better.

Sugerencia: 答えが抽象的で、質問に対して直接的な回答が不足しています。具体的に日常生活で何を覚える必要があるかを述べ、理由を付け加えましょう。

Ejemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember appointments and tasks, so I make notes to keep track of them.

Sugerencia: 文法の誤りがあり、表現が繰り返されています。より自然で簡潔な表現を使い、具体的な方法を説明しましょう。

Ejemplo: I remember important things, like promises, by taking notes on my computer or phone, which helps me not to forget them.

× I couldn't get higher score and society and so on, which are which.

✓ I couldn't get a higher score in society and so on, which are important.

The sentence contains a past tense issue and unclear phrasing. 'Couldn't get higher score' should be 'couldn't get a higher score' to include the article 'a' and correct singular/plural usage. The phrase 'society and so on, which are which' is unclear and needs clarification. The correction assumes the intended meaning is about getting higher scores in society-related subjects or contexts.

× I sometimes forget the promise with my friends and I was scored my friends so I started to to take notes.

✓ I sometimes forgot the promise with my friends and I was scolded by my friends, so I started to take notes.

The verb 'forget' should be in past tense 'forgot' to match the past time frame. 'Was scored my friends' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'was scolded by my friends'. Also, 'started to to take notes' has a repeated 'to' which should be corrected to 'started to take notes'.

× I think that to remember daily life, it is good to make notes, the things which people have in the day.

✓ I think that to remember daily life, it is good to make notes of the things which people have during the day.

The phrase 'make notes, the things which people have in the day' is incorrect. The preposition 'of' is needed after 'make notes' to indicate what is being noted. Also, 'in the day' is better expressed as 'during the day' to indicate the time period.

× I remember important things like promise by taking notes on my on my computer or phones and it is beneficial to memorize some things.

✓ I remember important things like promises by taking notes on my computer or phone, and it is beneficial to memorize some things.

The phrase 'like promise' should be plural 'like promises' to match the context. 'On my on my computer or phones' has a repeated 'on my' and 'phones' should be singular 'phone' to match the singular 'computer'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and pronoun usage.