Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“there many costs require me”应为“there are many cases that require me”。建议注意语法结构，避免语句不完整或错误，同时使表达更自然流畅。

Ejemplo: Actually, I'm not very good at memorising things, especially abstract scenes. However, there are many situations where I need to remember such information, so I just keep practicing to improve.

Sugerencia: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“it was happened”应为“it happened”，“unwanted Wednesday”表达不准确。建议加强语法准确性，使用更清晰的表达，并避免口语填充词。

Ejemplo: Yes, I forgot an important presentation last semester. It accounted for about 40% of my final grade. I thought it was on Friday, but it was actually on Wednesday, so I missed it.

Sugerencia: 回答中语法和表达有待改进，如“most important is the deadline of the assignment”应为“the most important things are assignment deadlines”，以及“change the medicine on it”应为“change the medicine on it every morning”。建议注意句子结构和词汇搭配，使表达更准确。

Ejemplo: As a student, the most important things I need to remember are assignment deadlines and the dates of final exams. Recently, I injured my arm, so I also have to remember to change the medicine on it every morning.

Sugerencia: 回答表达基本清晰，但有小的语法错误，如“write it down to my small notebook”应为“write it down in my small notebook”。建议注意介词使用和表达的自然流畅。

Ejemplo: Mostly, I write important things down in my small notebook and carry it with me. However, if something happens suddenly, I prefer to save it on my phone.

× but there many costs require me to remember something like that.

✓ but there are many costs that require me to remember something like that.

句子中缺少了动词“are”，导致句子结构不完整。'There be'结构需要有be动词来连接主语和谓语。

× I remember it was happened on Friday but it actually unwanted Wednesday so I missed it.

✓ I remember it happened on Friday but it was actually on Wednesday so I missed it.

动词“happened”不需要加“was”，因为“happened”已经是过去式。'unwanted'用错了，应该用“was actually on Wednesday”来表达时间。

× I have to remember change the medicine on it every day about in the morning.

✓ I have to remember to change the medicine on it every morning.

动词“remember”后面应接不定式“to change”，而不是动词原形。'about in the morning'表达不准确，改为“every morning”更自然。

× Mostly I just write it down to my small notebook and carry it with me, but if something just happens very quickly I would prefer to remember on my phone.

✓ Mostly I just write it down in my small notebook and carry it with me, but if something just happens very quickly I would prefer to remember it on my phone.

动词“write down”后应接介词“in”表示写在某物里面。'remember on my phone'缺少宾语，应该是“remember it on my phone”。