Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答は基本的な内容を含んでいますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が見られます。例えば、"people's name"は"people's names"が正しく、"speaking things"は意味が不明瞭です。より自然で効果的な表現を使い、文を簡潔にまとめることが必要です。

Ejemplo: Yes, I am good at memorizing things. For example, I can easily remember people's names and faces. When I meet a friend after a long time, I can recall our previous conversations clearly.

Sugerencia: 回答が不完全で意味が伝わりにくいです。文法の誤りや不自然な表現が多く、具体的な内容も不足しています。質問に直接答え、具体的な例を明確に述べる練習が必要です。

Ejemplo: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, when I was a student, I sometimes forgot to study for exams, which affected my test scores.

Sugerencia: 内容は理解できますが、文法や語順の誤りが多く、意味が不明瞭な部分があります。より自然な英語表現を使い、具体的な例を明確に述べることが重要です。

Ejemplo: I need to remember promises I make with my friends, family, and colleagues. For example, if I agree to have lunch with a friend, I must remember that appointment.

Sugerencia: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、文法や語彙の誤りがあり、表現が不自然です。"schedule map up"は不適切な表現で、"schedule"や"planner"などの適切な単語を使うべきです。

Ejemplo: I often forget important things, so to avoid that, I use a schedule or planner to organize and remember my tasks.

× I often remember people's name and face easily.

✓ I often remember people's names and faces easily.

The nouns 'name' and 'face' should be plural ('names' and 'faces') because 'people's' refers to multiple individuals, so their names and faces are multiple as well.

× When I met my friend after long time, I could recall speaking things with them.

✓ When I met my friends after a long time, I could recall things I spoke with them about.

The phrase 'after long time' needs an article 'a' to become 'after a long time'. Also, 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to match 'them'. The phrase 'recall speaking things' is awkward; it is better to say 'recall things I spoke with them about'.

× Test score is.

✓ My test score was low.

The original sentence 'Test score is.' is incomplete and lacks context. It should specify whose test score and provide a verb and complement. Here, 'My test score was low.' fits the context of forgetting important things affecting test scores.

× I need to remember promise with my friend, family and people related to company.

✓ I need to remember promises with my friends, family, and people related to the company.

The word 'promise' should be plural 'promises' because multiple promises are implied. Also, 'with' is acceptable but 'to' or 'from' could be better depending on context. 'People related to company' needs the definite article 'the' before 'company'.

× if I make a promise with my friend to eat lunch, you need I need to remember.

✓ If I make a promise with my friend to eat lunch, I need to remember it.

The phrase 'you need I need to remember' is incorrect and redundant. It should be 'I need to remember it.' Also, 'friend' can be singular here if referring to one friend.

× I often forget the important things, so to prevent that I manage crucial things with schedule map up.

✓ I often forget important things, so to prevent that, I manage crucial things by making a schedule.

The phrase 'manage crucial things with schedule map up' is awkward and unclear. It should be rephrased to 'manage crucial things by making a schedule' for clarity and correct sentence structure.