Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，且内容重复。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并使用更自然的表达方式。

Ejemplo: Yes, I am quite good at memorising, especially when it comes to urgent tasks or important information from textbooks. I can usually remember things quickly when needed.

Sugerencia: 回答不完整，最后一句话未表达完整的情感，且缺少连贯的连接词。建议补充完整情感表达，并使用连接词使回答更连贯。

Ejemplo: Yes, I once forgot my mother's birthday last year because I was busy with university deadlines. Although she didn't blame me, I felt very guilty about it.

Sugerencia: 回答内容混乱，表达不清晰，缺少逻辑和具体细节。建议理清思路，使用连接词，并具体说明需要记住的事项。

Ejemplo: In daily life, I need to remember assignments from my teachers, tasks given by my mentors, and shopping lists for groceries. These help me stay organized and manage my time well.

Sugerencia: 回答未完整表达结尾，且句子结构略显重复。建议完善结尾句，使用更自然的表达，并适当使用连接词。

Ejemplo: Since I was a child, my teachers and parents have advised me to write down important information to improve my memory. I still use this method because jotting down key points helps me remember them better.

× Well, I would say most of the time I get a good command of memorizing things, especially those urgent and pressing tasks and the knowledge in textbook.

✓ Well, I would say most of the time I get a good command of memorizing things, especially those urgent and pressing tasks and the knowledge in the textbook.

这里缺少了定冠词“the”，因为“textbook”是特指的，应该用“the textbook”。

× I would say I'm a kind of person who is very adept at memorizing things quickly before.

✓ I would say I'm the kind of person who is very adept at memorizing things quickly.

“a kind of person”后面通常用“the kind of person”表示特指，且“before”在这里用法不当，应去掉。

× Well, I would say it's my mother's birthday.

✓ Well, I would say it was my mother's birthday.

这里描述的是过去发生的事情，应该用过去时态“was”。

× At that time, I was in the university, you know, I was still a student, so I was busy in my deadlines and I forgot to give my blessings to her.

✓ At that time, I was at the university, you know, I was still a student, so I was busy with my deadlines and I forgot to give my blessings to her.

“in the university”应改为“at the university”表示在某个地点；“busy in my deadlines”应改为“busy with my deadlines”，介词用法错误。

× Yeah, although she didn't blame me, I still feel very.

✓ Yeah, although she didn't blame me, I still feel very bad.

句子缺少表语，导致不完整，需补充形容词“bad”使句子完整。

× Well, I think there are substantial things for us to remember in daily life from assignments, from bosses or mentors, all those items to purchase in their stores or supermarkets and I think because some steward students, so most of the time I should memorizing kinds of knowledge.

✓ Well, I think there are many things for us to remember in daily life, from assignments, from bosses or mentors, all those items to purchase in stores or supermarkets. Also, because I am a steward student, most of the time I should memorize various kinds of knowledge.

“substantial things”用词不当，应改为“many things”；“in their stores”改为“in stores”；“because some steward students”语法不完整，应改为“because I am a steward student”；“should memorizing”动词形式错误，应为“should memorize”；“kinds of knowledge”前加“various”更自然。

× I think because some steward students, so most of the time I should memorizing kinds of knowledge.

✓ Because I am a steward student, most of the time I should memorize kinds of knowledge.

“should memorizing”中“should”后应接动词原形“memorize”，而不是动名词。

× So I keep using this method and I think it's pretty good because whenever I try to jot down some key points I can.

✓ So I keep using this method and I think it's pretty good because whenever I try to jot down some key points, I can remember them.

句子不完整，缺少谓语部分，补充“remember them”使句子完整。