Memory— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“Like I can't memorize...”不符合英语表达习惯。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并且避免使用口语化的“Like”作为句首。

Ejemplo: Actually, I'm not very good at memorizing things. For example, I often forget my father and grandfather's phone numbers.

Sugerencia: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，尤其是“sign up my homework to my mentor”和“That makes me very disgusting and what I was”不符合英语习惯。建议使用正确的动词短语和表达情感的方式。

Ejemplo: Yes, last week I forgot to submit my homework to my mentor, which made me feel very disappointed in myself.

Sugerencia: 句子结构不完整，缺少主语和谓语，表达不流畅。建议完整表达身份和需要记忆的内容，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ejemplo: As a pharmacy student, I need to remember the uses of different medicines and how to analyze their effects.

Sugerencia: 回答较为自然，但句子稍显冗长且表达不够简洁。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达“important things”。

Ejemplo: I usually use my mobile phone's calendar to record important tasks, and it reminds me when they are due.

× Like I can't memorize the phone number of my father and my grandpa.

✓ Like I can't memorize the phone numbers of my father and my grandpa.

这里涉及单复数问题，'phone number' 应该用复数形式，因为有两个不同的人对应两个电话号码。建议将 'phone number' 改为 'phone numbers'。

× I forgot to sign up my homework to my mentor.

✓ I forgot to submit my homework to my mentor.

这里 'sign up' 用法错误，'sign up' 通常表示注册，提交作业应使用 'submit'。同时，'submit homework to someone' 是正确搭配。建议将 'sign up' 改为 'submit'。

× That makes me very disgusting and what I was.

✓ That made me feel very disgusted and upset.

'disgusting' 是形容事物令人厌恶，形容人时应使用 'disgusted' 表示感到厌恶。'what I was' 语义不清，应改为表达情绪的词汇如 'upset'。建议改为 'made me feel very disgusted and upset'。

× Student major in pharmacy so I need to remember is the use of medicine and how to analyze them.

✓ As a student majoring in pharmacy, what I need to remember is the use of medicine and how to analyze them.

句子缺少主语和正确的结构，'Student major in pharmacy' 应改为 'As a student majoring in pharmacy'，并且补充完整句子结构。建议调整句子结构使其完整通顺。

× how to analyze them.

✓ how to analyze it.

'medicine' 是不可数名词，指代时用单数 'it'，而非复数 'them'。建议将 'them' 改为 'it'。

× I always use my mobile phone to record some important things in my daily calendar which will remind me when the important thing comes to me.

✓ I always use my mobile phone to record some important things in my daily calendar, which reminds me when important things come up.

'remind me when the important thing comes to me' 表达不自然，改为 'reminds me when important things come up' 更符合英语习惯。建议调整表达使其更自然流畅。